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Band 6+: The following bar graph compares the age profiles of male and female cinema goers in the year 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image depicts a bar graph showing average number of visits per year (%) for women and men across various age groups: 14-17 years - Women 7%, Men 7%; 18-24 years - Women 15%, Men 16%; 25-34 years - Women 20%, Men 23%; 35-49 years - Women 25%, Men 25%; 50+ years - Women 33%, Men 29%.

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The bar chart shows the number of cinema enthusiasts among males and females, comparing different age groups in 2012.

Overall, males showed relatively higher enthusiasm in terms of going to the cinema in the early years of adulthood. However, the biggest share in all age groups was reported among their female counterparts. Other age groups were identical in proportions among both sexes.

Among males, the percentage of cinema goers rose steadily with age. From 14-17- year – olds showed a 7% increase, more than doubling in proportion in the age group of 18-24. Thereafter, the figures continued to go up noticeably to 23% and 25% among those aged 25-34 and 35-49, respectively. It is worth mentioning that over 50-year-olds reported the highest share of visits among this gender.

A similar age pattern was observed among women, showing a consistent growth with age. Those aged 14-17 accounted for the smallest share, representing the same 7% as their male counterparts. 18-24-year-olds women visited nearly the same percentage as men, by a margin of 1% difference, standing at 15%. As women aged, the share of their visits rose gradually up to the 40s. However, over than 50-years-olds reached a high of a whopping 33%.

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

among: 6

share: 4

cinema: 3

males: 3

groups: 3

their: 3

women: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main features of the graph and provides a clear overview of the trends. It successfully identifies the general upward trend in cinema attendance as age increases for both genders. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data interpretation and logical consistency. For instance, the overview states that the biggest share in all age groups was reported among females, but the data shows males had a higher percentage in the 18-24 and 25-34 age groups. Additionally, the description of the 14-17 age group as a '7% increase' is a misuse of terminology; it should be described as a percentage of the total, not an increase. To improve, ensure that comparisons between genders are strictly aligned with the data provided and use more precise language when describing statistical values.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is logically organized with a clear introduction, overview, and body paragraphs divided by gender. The progression of ideas is easy to follow. However, some cohesive devices and transitions could be smoother. For instance, the transition between the overview and the detailed analysis could be more seamless. Ensure that the relationship between sentences is clearly established through more varied linking words to avoid a slightly repetitive structure.

Lexical Resource

You have used a good range of vocabulary to describe trends, such as 'rose steadily', 'consistent growth', and 'accounted for'. There is an attempt to use more sophisticated phrasing like 'female counterparts'. To improve, aim for even greater precision and avoid slightly informal or hyperbolic language like 'a whopping', which is more suited to journalism than academic reporting. Also, be careful with word choices like 'enthusiasm' when the data specifically refers to the frequency of visits. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. However, there are several grammatical inaccuracies that hinder the flow. For example, 'From 14-17- year - olds showed a 7% increase' is a fragmented construction, and 'over than 50-years-olds' is ungrammatical. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, the correct use of prepositions, and the formation of compound adjectives (e.g., '18-24-year-old women' instead of '18-24-year-olds women'). Refining these areas will significantly improve the overall accuracy.

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