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Band 6+: The following maps show some of the changes that have taken place in Dubai in recent decades. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image shows two illustrations of the Clock Tower Roundabout in Dubai, one labeled "Dubai in the past" depicting a road with minimal traffic and no vehicles on the roundabout, a distinct single skyscraper, and sparse surrounding building structures; the other labeled "Present-day Dubai" featuring the same roundabout crowded with numerous vehicles including a significant number of white, yellow, and black cars on the roads, a considerably more developed skyline with multiple, variously sized skyscrapers enclosing the scene.

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The given map illustrates what kind of changes have been brought in Dubai during recent decades.

Overall, there have been done some modernizations around the Clock Tower Roundabout, such as new accommodations and less plants. Consequently. it is evident that current Dubai is aimed to serve citizenships and attractive more people for living there.

In the past, the city was not able to offer enough buildings or facilities for individuals, but it was full of steppes and plants around. The previous version of the given area did not allow to develop either tourism or life quality. Furthermore, there were noticeably less vehicles, which were ,obviously, due to a small number of population. However, there have been cut down most plants, which have been replaced by new facilities and tall apartments along the roads.As a result, it is seen to enhance Dubai’s population and have a considerable amount of cars nowadays.

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Task Response

The report covers the main features of the maps, noting the increase in buildings, vehicles, and the reduction of plants. Comparisons between the past and present are made. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions, such as the mention of 'less plants' which is not clearly supported by the visual description, and the report could be more precise in describing the changes. The overall structure is clear, but the language could be more formal and accurate.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs. However, there are some lapses in coherence, such as the abrupt transition between sentences and the use of 'Consequently. it is evident' which is a punctuation error that disrupts flow. The paragraphing could be more skillfully managed to improve the logical progression of ideas. To enhance coherence, ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single main idea and use cohesive devices more naturally to link sentences and paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for the task, with some attempts at less common words like 'modernizations' and 'steppes'. However, there are inaccuracies and awkward phrasings, such as 'attractive more people' and 'serve citizenships', which affect clarity. The range of vocabulary is limited, and there is a reliance on repetitive structures. To improve, expand your lexical range by using more precise and varied terms related to urban development and comparisons, and ensure that word choices are natural and appropriate.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and punctuation issues, such as 'there have been done some modernizations' (incorrect passive construction), 'it is seen to enhance' (unclear subject), and the misuse of commas and periods (e.g., 'Consequently. it is evident'). There is some variety in sentence structures, but control is inconsistent. To improve, focus on mastering basic grammar rules, particularly subject-verb agreement, verb tenses, and punctuation. Practice using a wider range of complex structures with greater accuracy.

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