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Band 4+: The graph above shows the stock price of four technology companies between 2011 and 2016.

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The image depicts a line graph with four fluctuating lines representing data over a period of 2011-2016; Facebook (2011:10,000, 2012:5,000, 2013:0, 2014:15,000, 2015:10,000, 2016:10,000), Google (2011:0, 2012:5,000, 2013:5,000, 2014:10,000, 2015:20,000, 2016:30,000), Apple (2011:0, 2012:0, 2013:35,000, 2014:5,000, 2015:5,000, 2016:5,000), Yahoo (2011:0, 2012:0, 2013:5,000, 2014:0, 2015:0, 2016:0).

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The line graph presents the value of stocks of different technology setups over a period of 2011 till 2016.

Facebook has the highest market value at the end of the term. while, google has the lowest. share value of apple has had sharp fluctuations over time. share price of apple in early years has been the highest, and has surpassed the price of all four companies. While, a progressively declining trend has been observed with yahoo.

The stock price of facebook has been progressively increasing from over 7000 shares in 2011 to 20,000 in 2016. However a sharp increase has been observed with Apple, worth of its shares reaching around 35,000 in 2012. This is the highest reading noted in all six years. Thereafter, alternating spikes has been observed, with the depriciation of share price in 2016.

A steady decline has been noted regarding the share price of Yahoo, falling from around 7000 in 2011 to below 5000 in 2016. On the other hand, the worth of stocks of google has remained static and lowest among all companies i.e around 1000.

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

price: 5

share: 4

value: 3

highest: 3

apple: 3

observed: 3

around: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

Your report is an attempt to address the task, but it contains several inaccuracies and some unclear descriptions that detract from task achievement. The data for Facebook, Apple, Google, and Yahoo are inaccurately reported (e.g., Facebook's trend is described as increasing when it fluctuates, Apple's peak is placed in 2012 instead of 2013, and Google is incorrectly described as static and lowest). Additionally, the overview is vague and does not accurately summarize key trends. To improve, ensure you accurately describe the main trends, make comparisons between companies, and clearly present the data as shown in the graph. Focus on clarity and avoid ambiguous statements.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction and two body paragraphs, but the flow is disrupted by unclear referencing and abrupt shifts between companies. For example, the first paragraph introduces Facebook, Google, Apple, and Yahoo, but the order of discussion is inconsistent, and the use of 'while' and 'However' is sometimes confusing. The second paragraph mixes trends for Facebook and Apple without clear separation, and the third paragraph discusses Yahoo and Google but lacks a clear link to the previous paragraph. To improve, use clear topic sentences for each paragraph and ensure each paragraph focuses on a distinct set of comparisons or time periods. Also, use cohesive devices (e.g., 'In contrast', 'Similarly') more precisely to guide the reader.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary for describing trends (e.g., 'progressively increasing', 'sharp fluctuations', 'steady decline'), but there are issues with word choice and accuracy. For instance, 'technology setups' is vague and should be 'technology companies'. 'Depriciation' is a misspelling of 'depreciation', and 'static' is used incorrectly to describe Google's trend (it actually increases). The range of vocabulary is limited, with repeated use of 'sharp' and 'decline'. To improve, use a wider variety of synonyms (e.g., 'surge', 'plummet', 'remain stable') and ensure precise word choice. Also, avoid informal or incorrect phrases like 'worth of its shares' - use 'share value' or 'stock price'. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. For example, 'while, google has the lowest' has an incorrect comma after 'while', and 'share value of apple has had sharp fluctuations' should be 'the share value of Apple has had sharp fluctuations' (missing article). There are also subject-verb agreement errors: 'alternating spikes has been observed' should be 'have been observed'. The sentence 'This is the highest reading noted in all six years' is awkward and should be 'This is the highest reading noted in the six-year period.' Additionally, the report lacks a clear range of complex structures, relying mostly on simple and compound sentences. To improve, practice using a mix of sentence structures (e.g., complex sentences with subordinate clauses) and proofread for articles, punctuation, and subject-verb agreement.

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