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Band 4+: The graph above shows the stock price of four technology companies between 2011 and 2016.

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The image depicts a line graph with four fluctuating lines representing data over a period of 2011-2016; Facebook (2011:10,000, 2012:5,000, 2013:0, 2014:15,000, 2015:10,000, 2016:10,000), Google (2011:0, 2012:5,000, 2013:5,000, 2014:10,000, 2015:20,000, 2016:30,000), Apple (2011:0, 2012:0, 2013:35,000, 2014:5,000, 2015:5,000, 2016:5,000), Yahoo (2011:0, 2012:0, 2013:5,000, 2014:0, 2015:0, 2016:0).

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The line graph displays the stock value of four different major corporations from 2011 to 2016.

Overall, the most striking shown in this figure is that Facebook’s slightly increased, while Yahoo’s declined, Apple’s stock rate fluctuated wildly throughout the period and Google’s slightly remain unchanged.

Facebook’s started the span time with a stock market rate of around 7500 and this consistently moved up year on year to reach a peak of around 20,000 in 2016. And the figures of Yahoo’s very similar value to Facebook, but in contrast it is devalued every year, until it is gradually drop around 2900 in 2016.

Apple’s stock was valued of 5000 in 2011 and jumped dramatically to nearly 34000 following the year. It is rapidly plummeted to about 7100 in 2013, then it is slowly grown up around 12000 in 2014. On top of that it is substantially fall to a price just over 6000 in 2016, The Google ratio of keep unchanged to the entire span time

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by describing the general trends of the four companies' stock prices. However, there are several inaccuracies and omissions that detract from the task achievement. The overall trend statement is somewhat unclear and contains errors (e.g., Facebook's stock is described as increasing, but the data shows fluctuations; Google is said to remain unchanged, which is incorrect). Specific data points are often inaccurate or not aligned with the given information (e.g., Facebook's starting value, Yahoo's decline, Apple's fluctuations). The report also lacks a clear and coherent structure, with some sentences incomplete or grammatically unclear. To improve, ensure that the overview accurately summarizes the main trends, and provide more precise data references while maintaining clarity and logical organization.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a basic structure with an introduction and an overview, but the organization of ideas is not always clear. The overview is somewhat confusing and does not accurately summarize the main trends. The body paragraphs lack clear topic sentences and the progression of ideas is not smooth. Cohesive devices are used in a limited and sometimes inaccurate way (e.g., 'And the figures of Yahoo's very similar value to Facebook, but in contrast it is devalued every year'). The report would benefit from clearer paragraphing and more logical linking of information.

Lexical Resource

The range of vocabulary is limited, and there are several errors in word choice and collocation (e.g., 'stock market rate', 'devalued every year', 'ratio of keep unchanged'). Some attempts at using more sophisticated language are made (e.g., 'fluctuated wildly', 'plummeted'), but these are not always accurate or natural. The report would benefit from a wider range of precise vocabulary related to trends and data description.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are numerous grammatical errors throughout the report, including subject-verb agreement ('Facebook's started', 'Google ratio of keep unchanged'), incorrect verb forms ('it is gradually drop', 'it is rapidly plummeted'), and missing articles or prepositions. The sentence structures are often incomplete or awkward, which significantly affects clarity. The report would benefit from a wider range of sentence structures and more accurate use of grammar and punctuation.

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