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Band 4+: The graph above shows the stock price of four technology companies between 2011 and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents a line graph depicting stock price movements for Facebook, Google, Apple, and Yahoo from 2011 to 2016. In 2011, the stock prices start with Facebook approximately at 0, Google around 5,000, Apple close to 5,000, and Yahoo near 15,000. By 2012, Facebook's price rises slightly over 10,000, Google ascends to near 10,000, Apple climbs significantly above 15,000, and Yahoo remains around 15,000. In 2013, Facebook's price increases above 10,000, Google jumps to nearly 15,000, Apple fluctuates around 15,000, and Yahoo falls below 10,000. In 2014, Facebook climbs over 10,000, Google reaches about 20,000, Apple approaches 30,000, and Yahoo drops slightly under 10,000. By 2015, Facebook surges to close to 25,000, Google maintains around 20,000, Apple exceeds 30,000, and Yahoo stabilizes under 5,000. In 2016, stock prices show Facebook around 10,000, Google close to 25,000, Apple approximately at 35,000, while Yahoo drops further below 5,000.

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The data displays the stock price of technology companies, Facebook, appel, google and yahoo from 2011 to 2016.

Overall, Google had stability on the stock price during that period, in addtion appel had instability on the stock price compared to yahoo had decrease gradualy, in contrast facebook had increase gradualy during that period comparing to other companies

Firstly, google has unstability between 2011 and 2016 which is over 0. Moreover Facebook has a remarkable gradually increase on stock price from over than 5000 to 20000, in opposite yahoo has a grafualy dicrease from 5000 to a proximity of 0. in addition for appel there is a big jumb reaching the top from 5000 to 3500 between 2011 and 2013, than there is a big instability decrease from 35000 to over than 5000 and the same for the rest years on that period , sometimes going up and sometimes going down during that period

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The report attempts to address the task but contains inaccuracies and some irrelevant information. The description of the trends is not always accurate, and there are some issues with grammar and vocabulary. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data, using precise language, and organizing the information more clearly.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The ideas are not presented in a coherent manner, making it difficult to follow the main points. Paragraphing is weak, and the transitions between sentences and ideas are abrupt. To improve coherence, focus on structuring the report with a clear introduction, body paragraphs that each address a specific aspect of the graph, and a concise conclusion. Use cohesive devices (e.g., conjunctions, pronouns, synonyms) to link ideas and sentences smoothly. Ensure that each paragraph has a clear topic sentence and that the supporting details are logically connected.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is limited and sometimes inaccurate ('appel,' 'addtion,' 'grafualy,' 'dicrease,' 'jumb'). There is a lack of precision in describing the trends and fluctuations in the stock prices. To enhance lexical resource, expand your vocabulary related to describing trends (e.g., increase, decrease, fluctuate, peak, plateau, surge, decline). Use more precise language to describe the magnitude and rate of change in the stock prices. Avoid using the same words repeatedly; instead, use synonyms to add variety and sophistication to your writing.

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The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect spelling ('appel,' 'addtion,' 'grafualy,' 'dicrease,' 'jumb'), incorrect word usage, and sentence structure issues. These errors significantly impede clarity and comprehension. To improve grammatical range and accuracy, focus on mastering basic grammar rules, including subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and proper punctuation. Proofread your work carefully to identify and correct errors. Consider using grammar-checking tools to help identify and address grammatical issues. Practice writing regularly to reinforce your understanding of grammar rules and improve your accuracy.

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