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Band 4+: The graph above shows the stock price of four technology companies between 2011 and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents a line graph depicting stock price movements for Facebook, Google, Apple, and Yahoo from 2011 to 2016. In 2011, the stock prices start with Facebook approximately at 0, Google around 5,000, Apple close to 5,000, and Yahoo near 15,000. By 2012, Facebook's price rises slightly over 10,000, Google ascends to near 10,000, Apple climbs significantly above 15,000, and Yahoo remains around 15,000. In 2013, Facebook's price increases above 10,000, Google jumps to nearly 15,000, Apple fluctuates around 15,000, and Yahoo falls below 10,000. In 2014, Facebook climbs over 10,000, Google reaches about 20,000, Apple approaches 30,000, and Yahoo drops slightly under 10,000. By 2015, Facebook surges to close to 25,000, Google maintains around 20,000, Apple exceeds 30,000, and Yahoo stabilizes under 5,000. In 2016, stock prices show Facebook around 10,000, Google close to 25,000, Apple approximately at 35,000, while Yahoo drops further below 5,000.

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The line graph displays the data about stock value of four technology companies peroid Between 2011 to 2016.

Overall, it is clear that Google price remained constant and Facebook increase slowly whereas a apple stock was dramatically increase and slowly drop down whereas yahoo fall downward.

In 2011 most companies started at around 5000 to 8000 in 2012 Apple pulse stock price Rose sharply about 33,000 which was the highest figure on the chart and after this week it fell down quickly around 12,000 in 2013 and it continued to decrease in the following years.

More yahoo stock price was decreased constantly from about 7000 in 2011 to nearly 15,000 in 2016 April so dramatic change it started around 4000 in 2011. Yahoo begin the recorded period with a very similar value to Facebook but in contest, it is true Draw back every years until it reaches a lot of about 2500 in 2016.

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The report addresses the task but contains some inaccuracies and omissions. The description of trends is not always precise, and there are some issues with data reporting. To improve, focus on providing more accurate data points and ensuring a clearer description of the trends for each company. Also, pay attention to grammar and sentence structure for better clarity.

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The report lacks a clear structure and logical flow. The information is not presented in a coherent manner, making it difficult to follow the trends and comparisons between the companies. Paragraphing is inconsistent, and transitions between sentences and ideas are weak. To improve coherence and cohesion, focus on organizing the information into logical paragraphs, using clear topic sentences, and employing transition words to connect ideas.

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The vocabulary used is limited and sometimes inaccurate. There are instances of imprecise word choice and a lack of variety in describing the stock price movements. To enhance lexical resource, try to use a wider range of vocabulary related to financial trends and comparisons. Focus on using synonyms and more specific terms to describe changes in stock prices.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward sentence structures. These errors significantly impact the clarity and accuracy of the report. To improve grammatical range and accuracy, focus on reviewing basic grammar rules, practicing sentence construction, and proofreading carefully for errors. Pay attention to verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and the correct use of articles and prepositions.

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