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Band 5+: The graph and bar chart below show the average monthly rainfall and temperature for one region of East Africa. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents a bar chart and line graph depicting average monthly rainfall and temperature for one region in East Africa. Rainfall (in millimeters) for each month: Jan-14, Feb-20, Mar-54, Apr-130, May-100, Jun-10, Jul-5, Aug-10, Sep-20, Oct-54, Nov-90, Dec-20. Corresponding temperature (in Celsius) for each month: Jan-21.5, Feb-22.0, Mar-21.8, Apr-21.6, May-21.1, Jun-20.7, Jul-20.5, Aug-20.8, Sep-21.1, Oct-21.5, Nov-21.8, Dec-21.9.

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The chart represents the mean monthly rainfall and temperature in millimetres and Celsius at an area of East Africa.

Overall, some correlation can be seen from rainfall and temperature. The recorded temperature shows very low variation.

To start, the month April shows most amount of rainfall which about 300 millimetres. Followed by, a three way tie between the month of May, October, November with around 150 millimetres of rainfall. Thirdly, Almost 100 millimetres of rainfall is seen by march. Lastly, rest of all the months rainfall is less than 50 millimetres. The lowest amount of rainfall is seen in month of July.

The highest temperature is seen the month of march which was just below 24 degrees and and July is colder when compared to rest of the months. The average monthly temperature is just 22 degrees. In the months of March, April and October there is very little change in temperature.

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rainfall: 7

temperature: 6

millimetres: 5

month: 4

march: 3

months: 3

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Task Response

The report identifies some main features but contains inaccuracies in the data reported. The description of rainfall amounts is not entirely accurate, and the temperature data also contains errors. To improve, ensure accurate data representation and avoid misinterpreting the values from the graph and chart. Also, the report could benefit from a clearer overall summary and more specific comparisons between rainfall and temperature patterns.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an attempt to organize information, but the flow could be improved. The overall structure is present, but the transitions between ideas are not always smooth. Consider using more cohesive devices to link sentences and paragraphs, creating a more logical progression of information. For example, using phrases like 'In contrast' or 'Similarly' can help to connect related points.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in terms of precision and variety. While the report conveys the main points, using more specific and descriptive language could enhance the impact. For instance, instead of 'shows most amount of rainfall,' consider 'experiences the highest rainfall.' Also, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to weather and climate to demonstrate a more sophisticated command of the language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. There are issues with subject-verb agreement, article usage, and sentence structure. For example, 'the month April shows most amount of rainfall which about 300 millimetres' contains multiple errors. Focus on improving your understanding and application of basic grammar rules. Review sentence structure and practice using a variety of sentence types to enhance the overall quality of your writing.

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