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Band 4+: The graph below depicts the information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region.

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The image shows a bar graph with two sets of data: population percentages (green) and global wealth (pink) by region. North America has approximately 5% population, 32% wealth; China 20% population, slightly under 10% wealth; Other Asia-Pacific 8% population, approximately 5% wealth; India 15% population, roughly 1% wealth; Europe 10% population, 30% wealth; Africa 10% population, less than 2% wealth; Latin America & Caribbean 8% population, slightly over 2% wealth; Rich Asia-Pacific 5% population, 25% wealth.

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The bar chart illustrate percentage of global population and distribution of welath by region

overall, North America, Europe and Rich Asia-Pacefic display high amount of global wealth while compared with other countries. On the other hand China, India and Other Asia pacific countries are display population growth than its global wealth.

North America has highest percentage of global wealth while compared its population, However, its value is highest one among other countries, value is nearly 35%. second highest one is Europe and third one is Rich Asia-Pacefic.India and africa belong lowest global wealth and value is negligible.

Secondly, population percentage is highest is China and its value naarly 25%. India,Other Asia pacific and europe value is averagely 15%. Lowest one is North America and Rich Asia-Pacefic countries.

However, North America Population and global wealth difference is significantly high and its value nearly 30% and Latin America and Caribean has lowest different between those two.

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global: 6

value: 6

population: 5

america: 5

wealth: 4

other: 4

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north: 3

europe: 3

countries: 3

lowest: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the main requirements of the task by identifying the key regions and comparing population with wealth. However, there are several issues that affect the clarity and accuracy of the response. There are frequent grammatical errors and awkward phrasing (e.g., 'are display population growth than its global wealth') that occasionally make the meaning difficult to follow. Additionally, while the report attempts to highlight key features, the data presentation is somewhat disorganized, and some comparisons are imprecise. To improve, focus on using more accurate comparative structures and ensuring that the relationship between the two data sets is described more clearly and cohesively.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a basic structure, but the progression of ideas is often interrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. While there is an attempt to use cohesive devices (e.g., 'On the other hand', 'Secondly', 'However'), they are not always used effectively to link ideas logically. To improve, focus on using a wider variety of transition signals and ensure that each paragraph has a clear, central topic sentence that guides the reader through your comparisons.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is quite limited and repetitive. There are several spelling errors (e.g., 'welath', 'Asia-Pacefic', 'naarly', 'Caribean') and instances of incorrect word forms (e.g., 'are display population growth'). To reach a higher band, aim to use more precise academic vocabulary for describing trends and comparisons, such as 'disparity', 'proportion', 'predominant', or 'marginal'. Avoid repeating the same words and try to use synonyms to describe the data. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and significantly impede the reader's ability to understand the report. There are issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'chart illustrate'), sentence structure (e.g., 'India and africa belong lowest global wealth'), and the use of articles and prepositions. Many sentences are fragmented or run-on. I recommend practicing complex sentence structures, such as using relative clauses (e.g., 'which is...') and comparative structures (e.g., 'more... than...'), and focusing on basic sentence accuracy before attempting more complex forms.

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