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Band 5+: The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101.Summarize the information be selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a line graph with the x-axis representing years from 1901 to 2101, and the y-axis representing births and deaths in thousands. The graph has two lines, one for births and the other for deaths. The birth rate line starts at around 40,000 in 1901, peaks at around 65,000 in 1941, declines to around 55,000 in 1961, and steadily increases to around 65,000 in 2101. The death rate line starts at around 10,000 in 1901, steadily increases to around 20,000 in 2021, and then rapidly increases to around 65,000 in 2101.

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THE LINE GRAPH SHOWS DATA ABOUT THE VARIATION OF BIRTH AND DEATH RATES IN NEW ZEALNAD SINCE 1901,AND FORCASTS TREND TIP UNTILL 2101.

THE DEATH RATE SHOWED A FLUCTUATED TREND WHILE THE BIRTH RATE EXPERIENCED A SINGFIFICANT RISE .

IN 1901,THE BIRTH RATE WAS AROUND 20 THOUSANDS AND THEN UNSTEADILY INCRESED TO THE PICK OF MORE THAN 65 THOUSANDS IN 1961.FROM THE FOLLOWING YEAR TO 2030,IT WENT UP AND DOWN BETWEEN 65 THOUSANDS AND 50 THOUSANDS AND THEN GRADUALLY DECLINED TO REACH 45 THOUSANDS IN THE END OF THE PERIOD.

ON THE CONTRARY,IN EARLY 1901,THE DEATH RATE(8 THOUSANDS) WAS LOWER THAN THE BIRTH RATE .HOWEVER DURING THEN AND 2001,IT CLIMBED TO NEARLY 28 THOUSAND WITH A WITH A LITTLE BIT OF RISE AND FALL.AFTAR THAT,IT EXPERIENCED A RAPID SURGE TO AROUND 58 THOUSANDS IN 2061,EXCEEDING THE BIRTH RATE IN 2041 AND REACHING ALMOST 55 THOUSANDS AT THE TERMINATION OF THE PERIOD WHICH WAS HIGHER THAT THE BIRTH RATE AT THAT TIME

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birth: 6

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The response provides a good overview of the main features of the graph, highlighting the trends in birth and death rates over the years. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data presented, such as incorrect numbers for birth and death rates in certain years.

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