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Band 5+: The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a line graph of birth and death rates in New Zealand from 1901 to 2101, with birth rates starting at around 30, peaking at 70 in 1961, and declining to around 40, while death rates start at around 10, peaking at 20 in 2011, and declining to around 10.

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The graph provides the data about the transformation’s rates in New Zealand from 1901 to 2101.

In general, while the death’s rates dramatically rose in 2021 during this period, the birth ‘s rates had moderately went down. However, it is obvious that both birth and death have drastically grow in 1961 and 1921. What’s even better, the birth rates in 1961had almost reached to the peak 70%, which made a strong comparison in 1921-the lowest point in the birth line.

Additionally, from 1941 to 2021 the birth’s rates had been maintaining for over 50%. Nevertheless, it is clearly observed that the death’s rates couldn’t exceed a half in the meanwhile. That said, from 2041 the death’s rate will steadily climb until 2101.

Overall, according to the graph we are able to predict that the birth’s rates will keep going down; while the death’s rates is expected to grow in the future.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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death's: 4

birth: 4

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The report provides a good overview of the main trends, but misses some key details and makes some inaccurate claims about the data.

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The report is generally coherent, but the flow is disrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The report uses a good range of vocabulary, but some words are used incorrectly or inappropriately.

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