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Band 5+: The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population 1030 and 204 counties living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains a line graph showing the percentage of the population living in cities from 1970 to 2040 for three countries: Philippines, Malaysia, and Indonesia. In 1970, the Philippines is at approximately 30%, Malaysia at about 28%, and Indonesia at roughly 14%. In 1980, Philippines reaches around 37%, Malaysia about 35%, and Indonesia about 20%. By 1990, the Philippines is near 44%, Malaysia around 45%, Indonesia approximately 30%. In 2000, Philippines at about 48%, Malaysia nearly 56%, Indonesia close to 42%. In 2010, Philippines around 49%, Malaysia about 67%, Indonesia roughly 50%. Projections for 2020 show the Philippines at 52%, Malaysia around 75%, Indonesia approximately 54%. By 2030, the Philippines is expected to be 56%, Malaysia about 80%, Indonesia roughly 60%. In 2040, Philippines potentially at 60%, Malaysia around 85%, Indonesia approximately 66%.

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The chart illustrates the ratio of the increasing population in cities in some Asian countries from 1970 to 2020, besides predictions of 2030 and 2040.

In 1970, Malaysia had about 30% of the total population and started gradually increasing by years till it reached about 80% in 2020. In comparison to Thailand, it was about 18% in 1970, but it didn’t change that much like Malaysia, where it was about 31% in 2020. While in the Philippines in 1970 was about 12% and Indonesia in 1970 was about 31%, but in 2020 both were almost the same, which was about 45%.

According to the average of increasing by years, you can predict that. In 2030 Malaysia will be about 83%, and in 2040 it will be about 86%, while in Thailand 2030 it will increase to 35%, and in 2040 it will go up to 45%. Philippines in 2030 will have 46% and in 2040 will increase to 50%, while Indonesia in 2030 and 2040 will have a higher rate compared to the Philippines, which will be 58%.

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The report partially addresses the task by presenting some relevant data but omits key information and includes inaccurate data. A more comprehensive overview of all three countries is needed, with precise figures.

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