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Band 4+: The graph below provides a breakdown of the UK weekly market share of visits to three social networking websites between March 2007 and March 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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Image for topic: The graph below provides a breakdown of the UK weekly market share of visits to three social networking websites between March 2007 and March 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image displays the weekly market share of visits in the UK from March 10, 2007, to March 08, 2008, for three websites: bebo.com, myspace.com, and facebook.com; bebo.com starts at approximately 1.15% on Mar 2007, peaks at around 1.6% in June 2007, fluctuates, and ends at around 1.44% in Mar 2008; myspace.com begins at about 1.8% in Mar 2007, slightly peaks around 1.9% in Apr 2007, declines over time, and ends near 0.89% in Mar 2008; facebook.com starts below 0.5% in Mar 2007, witnesses a steady rise throughout the period, surpassing bebo.com and myspace.com around Nov 2007, ultimately reaching 1.96% by Mar 2008.

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The line graph illustrates a failure of the united kingdom weekly marketplace influence the visit of three social websites from March 2007 to March 2008.

overall, it is clearly seen that the first period of UK weekly Market share visits were signifacntly dropped and fluctuated. However, the remain period had a gradual growth of visits.

To begin, 10th of March 2007 saw a slight rise in Bebo, my space and facebook visitis rate. In instance, facebook experienced a large increase in the percentage of visitors. However, my spece had a slow fluctuation and dropping throughout the year. Therefore, facebook reached a peak in 26th of August. Marking the most dramatic increase in the trend. Also the figure shows a variation between October to March 2008. Not to forget the three peaked accountable visits of Decmber.

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Task Response

The report generally addresses the task but contains inaccuracies and lacks specific data. The description of trends is vague and lacks precise details. To improve, focus on providing specific data points and using more accurate language to describe the trends. Also, ensure that the key features of the graph are clearly identified and supported with relevant information. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The introduction is unclear, and the overview is vague. The body paragraphs lack clear topic sentences and transitions, making it difficult to follow the main points. Improve paragraphing by focusing on distinct trends or periods in the data. Use cohesive devices (e.g., 'however,' 'in addition,' 'similarly') to connect ideas within and between paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a limited range of vocabulary, with some inaccuracies and inappropriate word choices (e.g., 'failure of the united kingdom weekly marketplace influence'). There is reliance on basic vocabulary and a lack of precise language to describe the trends and comparisons. Expand your vocabulary related to describing trends (e.g., 'increased steadily,' 'declined sharply,' 'remained stable') and use more specific language to convey the information accurately.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward sentence structures (e.g., 'the first period of UK weekly Market share visits were signifacntly dropped'). These errors impede understanding and detract from the overall quality of the report. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and sentence construction. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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