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Band 5+: The graph below provides a breakdown of the UK weekly market share of visits to three social networking websites between March 2007 and March 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image displays the weekly market share of visits in the UK from March 10, 2007, to March 08, 2008, for three websites: bebo.com, myspace.com, and facebook.com; bebo.com starts at approximately 1.15% on Mar 2007, peaks at around 1.6% in June 2007, fluctuates, and ends at around 1.44% in Mar 2008; myspace.com begins at about 1.8% in Mar 2007, slightly peaks around 1.9% in Apr 2007, declines over time, and ends near 0.89% in Mar 2008; facebook.com starts below 0.5% in Mar 2007, witnesses a steady rise throughout the period, surpassing bebo.com and myspace.com around Nov 2007, ultimately reaching 1.96% by Mar 2008.

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The given bar chart reveals the percentage of weekly visits to the UK market made through three various social networking websites over one year to march 2008. Overall, it is obvious that all three websites experienced a fluctuation, but two of them geberally increased by the end of the period.

The most attractive trend was visits from that illustrated overall increase by the one year. There was a dramatic rise in the share of visits to the UK market in this site, from lower 0.5% to the higher 1.5% between march 2007 and september 2007. However, this trend did not see any decreases in share, but the scale of growth became slower with some fluctautions between the timespan. In total, trend reached its peak at1.96% and took the highest place between these three sites.

On the other hand, there were also other websites used for visiting the UK market: , . The first website demonstrated rise in general from more than 1% to the 1.44% in march 2008, while the second one decreased dramatically from about 1.2% to 0.89% in the same period.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

visits: 3

three: 3

websites: 3

march: 3

trend: 3

between: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the requirements of the task by identifying the main trends and providing specific data points for all three websites. The overview is clear, and the comparison between the rising popularity of Facebook and the decline of MySpace is well-noted. To improve, ensure more precise descriptions of trends; for instance, describing Facebook's growth as 'dramatic' is acceptable, but the report could benefit from more sophisticated linking words to connect the movements of the different websites. Additionally, be careful with minor typographical errors and ensure the distinction between a 'bar chart' and a 'line graph' (implied by the description of trends over time) is accurate.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, the progression of ideas is sometimes hindered by awkward phrasing and imprecise linking. For instance, the transition between describing Facebook and the other two websites could be smoother. To improve, focus on using a wider variety of cohesive devices and ensure that each sentence flows naturally into the next without repetitive structures.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and occasionally inaccurate. There are several instances of awkward phrasing, such as 'visits from www.facebook.com that illustrated overall increase' and 'used for visiting the UK market,' which do not sound natural in an academic context. Additionally, there are spelling errors (e.g., 'geberally', 'fluctautions'). Aim to use more precise academic collocations, such as 'witnessed a steady climb' or 'experienced a significant decline,' and ensure correct spelling throughout. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence attempts, but grammatical errors are frequent and occasionally impede clarity. Issues include incorrect article usage (e.g., 'the higher 1.5%'), preposition errors, and awkward sentence constructions (e.g., 'this trend did not see any decreases'). To improve, practice using a wider range of complex structures with greater accuracy, paying close attention to subject-verb agreement and the correct use of articles and prepositions.

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