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The image presents a line graph illustrating daily average museum visitors in 2003; for summer, data starts at 200 visitors at 0900, rises to 650 by 1000, peaks at 1400 with 1300 visitors, decreases to 1200 at 1400, then drops to 200 at 1700 and zero at 1800; for winter, starts at zero at 0900, increases to 550 by 1100, peaks at 600 by 1200, drops slightly to 500 at 1300, returns to 600 at 1400, and decreases evenly to zero by 1800.

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The given line chart illustrates the daily average travellers number entering a museum the day, during both seasons in 2003.

Overall, it is clear that the number of visitors in summer was significantly higher than those in winter until 2 p.m, while the opposite was true for the figure for winter during the remaining hours of the day.

The museum was opened at 9 a.m in both seasons, and then the number of visitors witnessed a sharp rise to 1400 at noon. Its figure was soar higher than the figure for winter two-fold, with around 700 people.

From noon to 2 p.m, the number of visitors in summer held the top position again, followed by a sudden fall from at the peak by around 650 people. Besides, the figure for winter also declined from around 650 people to nearly 580 people, and then reaching a peak of 660 people. Its figure was similar to those of summer at 2 p.m.

After 2 p.m, visitor numbers declined in summer and winter. There was a plummet in summer, reaching zero at 4 p.m. Meanwhile, the figure for winter dropped to zero at 5 p.m.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

winter: 6

figure: 6

summer: 5

number: 4

people: 4

visitors: 3

around: 3

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Task Response

The report adequately covers the main trends and key features of the graph. The overall trends are identified, and some specific data points are included. To improve, focus on providing more precise data references and ensuring that all significant details are mentioned. Also, pay attention to the accuracy of the data cited and avoid generalizations that might not be entirely supported by the graph.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally understandable, but the organization could be improved. The flow of information is sometimes disrupted by abrupt transitions and a lack of clear connections between sentences and paragraphs. Consider using more cohesive devices (e.g., conjunctions, pronouns, synonyms) to link ideas and improve the overall flow. For example, the relationship between the summer and winter trends could be highlighted more explicitly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate but could be more precise and varied. There are instances of repetitive word choices (e.g., 'figure,' 'number of visitors'). Try to incorporate a wider range of synonyms and more specific vocabulary related to trends and data description (e.g., 'increased,' 'decreased,' 'fluctuated,' 'plateaued'). Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains grammatical errors that affect clarity. Some sentences are awkwardly phrased, and there are issues with verb tense consistency and subject-verb agreement. For example, 'Its figure was soar higher' is grammatically incorrect. Review basic grammar rules and sentence structure to improve accuracy. Pay attention to correct tense usage and ensure that subjects and verbs agree.

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