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Band 5+: The graph below show the percentage of household energy used and the amount of greenhouse gases produced in Australia. Summarise the information making comparisons where relevant

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The image displays two pie charts; the first chart details the energy use within an average Australian household: heating 42%, water heating 30%, refrigeration 7%, cooling 2%, lighting 4%, standby power 3%, other appliances 15%; the second chart depicts the resulting greenhouse gas emissions: heating 15%, water heating 32%, refrigeration 14%, cooling 3%, lighting 8%, standby power 3%, other appliances 28%.

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the pie graphs represent the rate of household energy used and the figures of greenhouse gases produced in Australia.

Overall, Water heating and other appliances showed maximum energy usage, whereas water heating, cooling and heating produced maximum greenhouse gases.

On on hand, the rate of energy used in heating water appliance is 23% with that other appliances used 24% of energy. While cooking and stand by utensil used same level of energy which is 5%. Heating and cooking utensil used 20% of energy while refrigeration and lighting gadgets used 12 percentage of energy.

On the other hand, heating and cooling appliances produced highest percentage of greenhouse gas which is 38 percentage whereas water heating produced 25 percentage of greenhouse gas. Further lighting and refrigeration gadgets produced same level of greenhouse gas which is 7 percentage, additionally cooking and stand by utensil emission 4 percentage of greenhouse gas.

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heating: 7

energy: 6

greenhouse: 6

percentage: 6

produced: 5

water: 4

other: 3

appliances: 3

cooking: 3

utensil: 3

which: 3

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The report provides a good overview of the information presented in the charts. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data presented, and the report could be more concise and focused. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

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The report is generally coherent, but the structure and flow could be improved. The use of phrases like 'on on hand' and 'on the other hand' is repetitive and detracts from the overall clarity.

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The report contains numerous grammatical errors, which significantly affect the clarity and fluency of the writing. The use of articles, prepositions, and verb tenses is inconsistent.

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