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Band 4+: the graph below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket soles in 1996 and 2000. Summarizes the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The image includes two bar graphs: on the left, "Percentage of films released" in Drama: 25% (1996), 30% (2000); Comedy: 20% (1996), 20% (2000); Fantasy: 5% (1996), 10% (2000); Romance: 2% (1996), 5% (2000); on the right, "Percentage of cinema ticket sales" with Drama: 10% (1996), 5% (2000); Comedy: 25% (1996), 22% (2000); Fantasy: 8% (1996), 15% (2000); Romance: 2% (1996), 4% (2000).

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The bar char illustrates about total percentage of films realised and total percentage ticket sales Types of film: drama, comedy, fantasy and romance. Between 1996 and 2000.The unit meansured is percentage. In both year , fluctuate moderately of cinema ticket sales.

Overall, in both year of film realised decrese.

Started 1996 , separate reduce 26% to 5%. In 2000, drama the most highest than other at 35%. Comedy fall at 10 times percentages. Fantasy exactly same with Comedy fall 10 times at 15%. Romance same at 5 % in 1996 and 2000 of film realised.

Cinema ticket salles fluctuate in both year. Drama 15 % in 1996 year. Comedy 5 times increase moderately at 20%. Fantasy dip dramatically at 3%. Romance increase slightly at 10% in 1996. In 2000, the most highest comedy at around 24% then fell gradually at 6%. Even nore reduce 4% in romance.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

comedy: 5

romance: 4

percentage: 3

ticket: 3

drama: 3

fantasy: 3

times: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains significant inaccuracies and misinterpretations of the data. The description of the data is confusing and lacks clarity. The organization is weak, and the language used is not always accurate or appropriate. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data, organizing the information logically, and using precise language to describe trends and comparisons. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks a clear structure and logical flow. The information is presented in a disorganized manner, making it difficult to follow the main points and comparisons. Paragraphing is not effectively used to separate ideas. Consider organizing the report with a clear introduction, body paragraphs focusing on specific trends or comparisons, and a concise conclusion. Use cohesive devices (e.g., conjunctions, pronouns, synonyms) to link ideas and sentences together smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is limited and sometimes inaccurate. There are instances of imprecise word choice (e.g., "realised" instead of "released," "meansured" instead of "measured," "salles" instead of "sales"). The range of vocabulary is not sufficient to express the information effectively. Expand your vocabulary related to describing trends, comparisons, and proportions. Use a dictionary or thesaurus to find more precise and varied words. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, incorrect use of articles, and awkward sentence structures. These errors significantly impede understanding. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and sentence construction. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors. Consider using online grammar checkers or seeking feedback from a language tutor.

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