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Band 5+: The graph below shows annual water usage (in million of cubic meters) by industries in some countries

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The image shows bars of varying lengths representing two categories, 'Ground water' and 'Public supply', for seven sectors with numerical values: Fuel has Ground water 10, Public supply 70; Food/drinks has Ground water 110, Public supply 190; Machinery has Ground water 10, Public supply 100; Metal has Ground water 240, Public supply 90; Chemicals has Ground water 240, Public supply 430; Paper has Ground water 20, Public supply 190; Textiles has Ground water 10, Public supply 80.

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The graph below illustrates yearly liquid usage by different facilities in some countries shown in millions cubic metres.

Overall, the industry that uses the most water is chemical industry with 670 million cubic metres of water per year, and on the other hand we have fuel that uses only 80 per year. The second place takes Metal industry with 330 millions combined.

Every kind of fabrics uses two kinds of water, taken from underground and from public supply. The industry with the most used of both kinds of water is chemical with 430 million from ground and 240 from public reservoirs. Facility with less used ground water is Machinery with only ten million per year. Both fabrics with less used public water supplies are textiles and fuel with only 10 million water each every twelve months and the fuel is also the facility with less used water of all industries.

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The report covers the main features of the graph and provides an overview with some specific details. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported (e.g., '430 million from ground and 240 from public reservoirs' should be reversed). To improve, ensure data accuracy and vary your language to describe the data more effectively.

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The report presents an overview and attempts to highlight key trends, but the organization could be improved. The flow of information is somewhat disjointed, and the connections between sentences and ideas are not always clear. Consider using more cohesive devices (e.g., conjunctions, pronouns, synonyms) to link ideas and improve the overall flow. Paragraphing could also be more effectively used to group related information and create a more logical structure.

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The report uses a range of vocabulary relevant to the topic, but there are instances where the word choice could be more precise or sophisticated. For example, varying the language used to describe water usage (e.g., consumption, extraction, utilization) could enhance the report. Additionally, ensure that vocabulary is used accurately and appropriately throughout the report.

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The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are noticeable grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and accurate use of articles and prepositions. Proofreading carefully for these errors can significantly improve the grammatical accuracy of the report.

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