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The image shows bars of varying lengths representing two categories, 'Ground water' and 'Public supply', for seven sectors with numerical values: Fuel has Ground water 10, Public supply 70; Food/drinks has Ground water 110, Public supply 190; Machinery has Ground water 10, Public supply 100; Metal has Ground water 240, Public supply 90; Chemicals has Ground water 240, Public supply 430; Paper has Ground water 20, Public supply 190; Textiles has Ground water 10, Public supply 80.

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The graph depicts the water usage per year (measured in millions of cubic meters) by various industries in serveral regions.

The industry that has the heaviest use of water is the chemicals industry. They use over 600 million cubic meters of water per year. Conversely, the fuel businesses consume the least amount of water, accounting for 80 million cubic meters, almost one-eighth of that in the chemicals counterpart. Other fields of businesses such as food/drinks, metal and paper recorded a moderate usage of water of around 200-300 million cubic meters. While textiles and machinery industry consumed slight amount of water of 90 and 110 million cubic meters respectively.

Most of the ground water is used in the chemical field, contributing 430 million cubic meters, while in the field of machinery only uses 10 million cubic meters. On the other hand, most of the public supply water is taken up by metal industry (240 million cubic meters) whereas both the field of fuel and textiles only consumed 10 million cubic meters of water each.

To conclude, the industry of chemicals rely the most on water while the industry of fuel rely the least. Overall, in terms of the source of water, ground water is more commonly consumed by various industries than publiy supply water.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task well, providing a general overview of the water usage by different industries. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported, particularly in the third paragraph. For instance, it states that most of the public supply water is taken up by the metal industry (240 million cubic meters), which is incorrect according to the provided data. To improve, ensure greater accuracy in data reporting and avoid generalizations that are not fully supported by the graph.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized and easy to follow. However, there are a few areas where the flow could be improved. For instance, the transition between the overall water usage and the breakdown by water source (groundwater vs. public supply) could be smoother. Consider using transition words or phrases to connect these ideas more explicitly. Also, the final concluding sentence seems to have an error, as the data suggests public supply is used more than ground water.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, using terms like 'heaviest use,' 'conversely,' 'moderate usage,' and 'slight amount.' To further enhance the lexical resource, consider incorporating more specific vocabulary related to water usage or industrial processes. For example, instead of 'use of water,' you could use 'water consumption' or 'water demand' in certain contexts. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good command of grammar, with a variety of sentence structures used. However, there are a few grammatical errors and phrasing issues that need attention. For example, in the second paragraph, 'most of the public supply water is taken up by metal industry (240 million cubic meters)' is not accurate according to the graph. Proofreading carefully to eliminate these errors will improve the overall score.

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