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Band 6+: The graph below shows information about the total oil consumption of four major consumers from 2009 to 2030. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a graph of oil use of major consumers from 2009 to 2030, with US (solid blue line) starting around 9 million B/D, China (green dashed line) starting at 4 million B/D, Western Europe and Japan (red dotted line) at 6 million B/D, and Middle East (purple dot-dash line) around 2 million B/D. All lines show a downward trend, with US dropping to around 5 million B/D by 2030, China and Western Europe and Japan both around 3 million B/D, and Middle East at 1 million B/D.

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The chart above depicts the usage of oil of the 4 largest consumers between 2009 and 2030.

Overall, except form the US, in all of the geographic areas, the consumption has levelled off between 2 to 3 millions of barrels per day. On the contrary, the US, which once was the greater consumer, saw a sharp fall, progressively alligning with the others.

While China’s usage was rising until 2025, to almost stabilyze with a slight reduction then, the Middle East has seen a consistent but not significant growth since 2009. Nevertheless, they both reached a number around 3 millions in 2030. At the same time, in Western Europe and Japan, the data shows a steady decrease in millions of barrels, going from their peak at 4 to their lowest record near to 2.

In regard to the US, after years of fluctuation from 2009 and 2015, they have seen a persistent drop that brought them to slightely higher than 4 millions barrel at the end of the line graph.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the overall trends and making some comparisons. However, there are several inaccuracies and omissions. The initial values for China, Western Europe/Japan, and the Middle East are incorrect, and the trends described for China and the Middle East are opposite to the visual description. The report also omits the Middle East's downward trend and misrepresents the US trend. To improve, ensure that the data and trends are accurately reported, and include all key features with appropriate comparisons.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction and body paragraphs, but the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear references. For example, 'except form the US' and 'alligning' cause minor confusion. The paragraphing is adequate, but the progression of ideas could be smoother. To improve, ensure each paragraph has a clear central topic and use cohesive devices more effectively to link sentences and ideas.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, with some good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'depicts', 'levelled off', 'persistent drop'). However, there are several spelling errors (e.g., 'form' instead of 'from', 'alligning' instead of 'aligning', 'stabilyze' instead of 'stabilize', 'slightely' instead of 'slightly') and some imprecise word choices (e.g., 'greater consumer' instead of 'largest consumer'). To improve, focus on accurate spelling and using more precise and varied vocabulary to describe trends and comparisons. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are several grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, 'except form the US' should be 'except for the US', 'alligning' should be 'aligning', and 'slightely higher than 4 millions barrel' should be 'slightly higher than 4 million barrels'. There are also issues with subject-verb agreement and article usage. To improve, review grammar rules for prepositions, plural forms, and verb tenses, and proofread carefully to eliminate errors.

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