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Band 5+: The graph below shows the annual amount (kg) of meat eaten per person in five different countries from 1961 to 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image depicts a graph illustrating annual meat consumption per person across six countries from 1961 to 2013, with absolute values for specified years: China starts at approximately 3 kg in 1961, reaching around 41 kg in 2013; UK starts at roughly 72 kg in 1961, declining to about 65 kg in 2013; Canada begins at nearly 68 kg in 1961, slightly decreasing to close to 66 kg in 2013; Brazil shows growth from about 16 kg in 1961 to approximately 39 kg in 2013; Kenya remains constant from nearly 7 kg in 1961 to around 10 kg in 2013.

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The graph shows information about how many kilograms of meat are eaten by one person per year, in five different countries between 1961 and 2013.

Overall, in UK,people ate meat more than other countries, but at the end of the period it became the same with Canada. In 1961, China and Brazil were the lowest ones, however China was going up more rapidly than Brazil. In addition, Kenya fell from third place to the last.

It can be seen, there was significant rose from almost 1kg in 1961 to over 40kg in 2013, in China. In 1961, Canada was on 43kg, United States was on 60kg, although they were changed over the period and they became equal on 50kg in 2013. Amount of meat for per person in Kenya was decreased from almost 20kg in 1961 to 10kg in 2013. As mentioned earlier, figure for meat products eaten in Brazil was the same as in China, also increased from 1kg in 1961 to 20kg in 2013.

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B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

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brazil: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task, but there are inaccuracies and some irrelevant information. The organization is present but could be improved for clarity. To improve, focus on accurate data representation and clearer structure.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates some organization, but the progression of ideas is not always clear. The 'overall' paragraph attempts to summarize but lacks precision and clarity. The subsequent paragraphs contain disconnected observations, making it difficult to follow a clear line of reasoning. To improve coherence, focus on grouping related information together and using transition words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, discuss countries with similar trends in the same paragraph and use phrases like 'In contrast' or 'Similarly' to highlight comparisons.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and somewhat repetitive ('eat,' 'meat,' 'countries'). There's a lack of precision in describing trends and quantities. To enhance lexical resource, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to trends (e.g., 'increased,' 'decreased,' 'fluctuated,' 'remained stable') and quantities (e.g., 'approximately,' 'significantly,' 'slightly'). Also, use synonyms to avoid repetition. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('people ate meat more than other countries'), subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing ('there was significant rose'). Sentence structure is also quite simple, limiting the complexity of the analysis. To improve grammatical range and accuracy, focus on using a variety of sentence structures (e.g., complex sentences with subordinate clauses) and carefully proofread for errors in verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and word choice. Pay attention to the correct use of prepositions and articles.

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Band 5+: The graph below shows the annual amount (kg) of meat eaten per person in five different countries from 1961 to 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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