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Band 5+: The graph below shows the average daily sales of selected food items at the Vista Café, by season.

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The image contains a bar chart titled 'Average Daily Sales, by Number of Servings,' comparing Winter and Summer sales for five food items, with a 'Servings sold' axis from 0 to 80. For Hot coffee, sales were 75 in Winter and 30 in Summer. For Iced coffee, Winter sales were approximately 2 while Summer sales were 40. For Ice cream, sales were 25 in Winter and 35 in Summer. For Soup, sales were 50 in Winter and 25 in Summer. For Salad, sales were 25 in both Winter and Summer.

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The bar chart shows the medium every day sales chosen food items at the Vista Cafe, in winter and summer.

Overall, significantly bigger indicator shows Hot Coffee. In summer the highest price has iced coffee while in winter sales of iced coffee has the least sold.

Servings sold in winter of hot coffee make up around 80, Soup 50, salad about 30 and ice cream is around 30. The smaller sale on Iced coffee, it has almost zero. If compare sales iced coffee, this is significantly over in summer. However, sales Hot coffee greatly higher than in summer. The secondary servings sold make up ice cream around 40.

Average daily sales of soup and salad in summer total about 30. Moreover, in summer and in winter realization salad are identical. The average amount in winter is ice cream, which make up around 30. Generally, winter and summer sales are not too different.

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coffee: 7

sales: 6

winter: 6

summer: 6

around: 4

salad: 3

cream: 3

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The report addresses the task, but there are some inaccuracies and a lack of clarity. The organization could be improved by grouping information more logically. For example, comparing and contrasting each food item across seasons would enhance coherence. Also, avoid using the word 'price' when referring to sales figures. To improve, focus on providing more specific details and ensuring accuracy in data representation. Also, use a wider range of vocabulary to describe the trends and comparisons.

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The report lacks clear organization and transitions between ideas. The flow of information is disjointed, making it difficult to follow the main points and supporting details. Paragraphing is present but not effectively used to group related information. Consider using topic sentences to introduce the main idea of each paragraph and transition words to connect ideas smoothly.

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The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. There are instances of inaccurate word choice (e.g., 'medium every day sales,' 'significantly bigger indicator,' 'highest price'). To improve, focus on using more specific and varied vocabulary related to sales figures and trends. Use a thesaurus to find synonyms and expand your lexical range.

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The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward sentence structures. There are also issues with article usage and preposition choice. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and sentence construction. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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