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Band 6+: the graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three different metals during 2014

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The image presents a line graph depicting the average monthly percentage change in prices for copper, nickel, and zinc over the year 2014. In January, copper is at 1%, nickel at 6%, zinc at 1%. February shows copper at 0%, nickel at 4.5%, zinc at 1%. March presents copper at -1%, nickel at 2%, zinc at 1%. April data includes copper at -2%, nickel at -0.5%, zinc at 1%. May indicates copper at -2%, nickel at -2%, zinc at 1%. June captures copper at -1.5%, nickel at -2.5%, zinc at 0%. July records copper at -2%, nickel at -3%, zinc at -0.5%. August displays copper at -2.5%, nickel at -3%, zinc at -1%. September has copper at -2.5%, nickel at -1%, zinc at 0%. October shows copper at -2%, nickel at -0.5%, zinc at 1%. November captures copper at 0%, nickel at -1%, zinc at 1%. Finally, December presents copper at 2%, nickel at 3%, zinc at 1.5%.

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The given line graph illustrates the proportion of the price changes of copper, nickel and zinc in 2014 between January and December.

Overall, fluctuations have been experienced in prices of each three materials during the given period. There were downward trends for both copper and nickel average prices change from January to May, whereas first the figure of Zinc increased from 1% to 3% in February and then decreased constantly until June at 1%. The change in price remained steady between July and September for each three materials. The amount of nickel and copper price change were at the highest level in January by 6% and 2% respectively, while the peak level of zinc price change has been seen in February by 3%. On the other hand, the lowest price change of nickel and one of the two lowest price changes of copper and zinc were in June.

While the figures of nickel and zinc rose dramatically from -2% to 1% and %-1 to over 1% respectively, the percentage for copper remained constantly at slightly below 1% from October to November. The nickel and zinc price change declined sharply from May to June in a similar way, but the percentage of was constant during this period.

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price: 7

nickel: 6

change: 6

copper: 5

january: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by describing the main trends and key features of the graph. It provides an overview and highlights significant changes, such as the peaks and troughs for each metal. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data (e.g., zinc's February value is stated as 3% instead of 1%, and the description of the October-November period for copper is slightly off). Additionally, the report could be more clearly organized, with a more logical progression of ideas and smoother transitions between paragraphs. To improve, ensure all data points are accurately reported and consider structuring the report to first describe the overall trends, then provide specific details for each metal in a systematic manner.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, an overview, and body paragraphs, but the flow is sometimes disrupted by unclear referencing and awkward phrasing. For example, 'the percentage of was constant' is incomplete, and the transition between paragraphs could be smoother. To improve, ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea and use cohesive devices (e.g., 'in contrast', 'similarly') more effectively to guide the reader. Also, avoid abrupt shifts between time periods and metals.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, with some good attempts at variation (e.g., 'fluctuations', 'downward trends', 'peak level', 'declined sharply'). However, there are inaccuracies and repetitions (e.g., 'price change' used repeatedly, 'constantly' instead of 'constant', and '%-1' instead of '-1%'). To improve, use a wider range of precise terms (e.g., 'experienced a decline', 'remained stable', 'saw a significant rise') and ensure correct word forms and collocations. Avoid informal or incorrect expressions like 'each three materials'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a reasonable range of sentence structures, but there are several grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. Examples include 'the figure of Zinc increased' (should be 'zinc'), 'decreased constantly' (should be 'decreased steadily' or 'continuously'), 'the percentage of was constant' (missing noun), and inconsistent use of articles. To improve, proofread for subject-verb agreement, article usage, and sentence completeness. Also, vary sentence structures more, using complex sentences with subordinate clauses to enhance grammatical range.

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