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Band 6+: The graph below shows the changes in number of students in different countries from 2021 to 2024. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a line graph titled "The number of students," showing data for four countries from 2021 to 2024 on a vertical axis from 0 to 35. For Japan, the student numbers are 10 in 2021, approximately 12.5 in 2022, 15 in 2023, and 20 in 2024. For Korea, the numbers are 15 in 2021, approximately 12.5 in 2022, 10 in 2023, and 10 in 2024. Uzbekistan's figures are approximately 7 in 2021, 8 in 2022, 9.5 in 2023, and 11 in 2024. Vietnam's data points are approximately 19 in 2021, 25 in 2022, approximately 26.5 in 2023, and approximately 29 in 2024.

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The line graph gives information about the quantity of students in Vietnam, Japan, Korea and Uzbekistan between 2021 and 2024.

Overall, the number of students in Vietnam, Uzbekistan and Japan increased over the period shown. However, the same figure for Korea followed an opposite trend.

Focusing on increases first, the amount of students in Vietnam went up slightly from about 19,000 in the first year to around 29 million in the final year. Furthermore, the figure for Japan experienced significant growth from 10,000 in 2021 to 20,000 in 2024. Moreover, students’ numbers in Uzbekistan saw a minimal increase from approximately 7,000 in 2021 to around 11,000 in 2024.

By contrast, Korea diverged from this trend. The Korean number declined from 15,000 in 2021 to 10,000 in 2024.

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Overall Band Score

6.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

students: 3

vietnam: 3

japan: 3

korea: 3

uzbekistan: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively summarizes the main trends and provides relevant comparisons. The data is mostly accurate, and the overview is clear. To improve, ensure all data points are as precise as possible and avoid minor inaccuracies. Also, pay attention to the units used (thousands vs. millions) for consistency. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear overview and supporting paragraphs. The use of cohesive devices like 'overall,' 'however,' 'focusing on,' 'furthermore,' 'moreover,' and 'by contrast' enhances the flow of information. However, consider varying the cohesive devices used to avoid repetition and further improve the sophistication of the writing. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'the figure for,' you could use synonyms or rephrase the sentences.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary suitable for describing trends and quantities. Terms like 'increased,' 'opposite trend,' 'significant growth,' and 'minimal increase' are used appropriately. To enhance the lexical resource, consider incorporating more precise vocabulary related to trends (e.g., 'plateaued,' 'fluctuated') and quantities. Also, ensure consistency in the use of approximations (e.g., 'about,' 'around,' 'approximately'). Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good command of grammar with generally accurate sentence structures. There are a few minor errors, but they do not significantly impede understanding. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement and the correct use of articles and prepositions. For example, double-check phrases like 'the amount of students' to ensure grammatical correctness ('the number of students').

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