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Band 5+: The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by a University Admission Office over a six-month period in 2021.

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The image shows the number of enquiries over Jan-Jun, in-person: Jan 400, Feb 600, Mar 800, Apr 1200, May 1600, Jun 1900; by letter/email: Jan 800, Feb 1000, Mar 700, Apr 500, May 400, Jun 300; by telephone: Jan 900, Feb 1000, Mar 1000, Apr 1400, May 1600, Jun 1600.

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The line graph gives information about the number of enquires which University Admission Officials received from January to June in 2021.

Overall, two types of enquires increased which are enquires in person and by telephone. However, enquires by email & letter was at the lowest after a six-month period.

The enquires which are requested mostly are in person and by phone. Although request in person was the lowest in January, it has overtaken by both phone and email & letter at the end of six-month period. From January till July, its requests increased dramatically between 400 and over 1800. Requests by phone, which started with largest enquires with the number of about 850. It raised marginally after a slight dip. When it reached to 1000, it remained unchanged within a month between March and April.

Requests by email & letter decreased significantly with in half year. Although it was the second top in January, it remained the lowest at the end of six-month period. The university received about 760 enquires from email or letter in January but then it decreased to 380 enquires at the end of the six-month period.

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enquires: 8

january: 5

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email: 4

letter: 4

six-month: 4

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person: 3

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lowest: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main trends and compares the three categories appropriately. However, there are some inaccuracies in data (e.g., 'over 1800' instead of 1900, 'about 850' instead of 900, 'about 760' instead of 800, '380' instead of 300) and minor omissions (e.g., missing the plateau for telephone in March). The structure is clear, but the language could be more precise. Focus on accurate data representation and avoid vague terms like 'dramatically' or 'marginally' without specific figures.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction and overview, but the body paragraphs lack logical progression and clear topic sentences. Cohesive devices are used inconsistently, and some sentences are poorly connected, making the message harder to follow. To improve, use clearer paragraphing and more effective linking words to guide the reader through the trends.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but limited, with some repetition and inappropriate word choices (e.g., 'enquires' instead of 'enquiries', 'overtaken by both phone and email & letter'). There is an attempt to use a range of expressions, but accuracy and naturalness are lacking. To improve, expand your vocabulary for describing trends and use more precise terms.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are frequent grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement issues ('enquires... was'), incorrect verb forms ('it has overtaken'), and punctuation problems. Sentence structures are often awkward or incomplete. To improve, focus on basic grammar rules and practice writing more complex sentences accurately.

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