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Band 8+: The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by a University Admission Office over a six-month period in 2021.

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The image shows the number of enquiries over Jan-Jun, in-person: Jan 400, Feb 600, Mar 800, Apr 1200, May 1600, Jun 1900; by letter/email: Jan 800, Feb 1000, Mar 700, Apr 500, May 400, Jun 300; by telephone: Jan 900, Feb 1000, Mar 1000, Apr 1400, May 1600, Jun 1600.

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The line graph illustrates the number of enquiries made to the University Admissions Office from January to June 2021.

It is clear from the graph that the enquiries made in person and by telephone increased over this timeframe, while enquiries made by letter or email declined.

According to the trend shown in the graph, in-person enquiries increased drastically from around 400 to approximately 2000, while enquiries made by telephone rose gradually over the course of six months. Initially, telephone enquiries dropped from 900 to 800, before increasing to 1000 in the third month. The number remained steady from March to April and then increased dramatically in May and June to reach 1600 enquiries by the end of the period.

In contrast, enquiries by letter/email show an opposite trend, declining steadily from about 800 to about 400 over the period of six months. The number remained constant from January to the middle of March at about 700 before dropping gradually to nearly 500 by the middle of May. Then, the number remained unchanged until the end of the month.

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number: 4

graph: 3

telephone: 3

increased: 3

remained: 3

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Task Response

The report appropriately addresses the task by providing an overview and describing the main trends for all three channels. The data is generally accurate, with minor deviations (e.g., 'approximately 2000' for in-person, 'dropped from 900 to 800' for telephone) that do not detract from the overall clarity. The structure is logical, with a clear introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. To improve, ensure all data points are precisely reported and consider adding a concluding sentence to summarize the key trends. Overall, the response is well-organized and covers the requirements effectively.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is well-organized and easy to follow, with a clear overall structure. The introduction paraphrases the task, and the overview effectively summarizes the main trends. The body paragraphs are logically divided by channel type, and cohesive devices are used appropriately. However, the final sentence is incomplete, which slightly disrupts the flow. To improve, ensure each paragraph ends with a complete thought and consider using a wider range of linking words to enhance cohesion.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, with appropriate use of terms such as 'illustrates', 'declined', 'increased drastically', 'rose gradually', and 'remained steady'. The language is generally precise and natural. To reach a higher band, you could incorporate more sophisticated synonyms and avoid repetition (e.g., 'enquiries' is used frequently). Additionally, using more varied expressions to describe trends (e.g., 'surged', 'plummeted', 'levelled off') would enhance lexical flexibility.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report shows a strong command of grammar, with a variety of sentence structures used accurately. There are no significant errors, and punctuation is correct. However, the final sentence is incomplete, which is a minor lapse. To achieve a band 9, ensure all sentences are complete and consider using more complex structures, such as conditional or passive forms, to demonstrate full grammatical flexibility.

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