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The image shows a line graph displaying a six-month period in 2011, with the number of inquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city. The graph has three lines representing inquiries made in-person, by letter/email, and by telephone. In January, in-person inquiries were at 400, letter/email at 200, and telephone at 600. In February, in-person increased to 600, letter/email to 400, and telephone to 900. In March, in-person reached 800, letter/email 500, and telephone 1200. April saw in-person at 1000, letter/email at 800, and telephone at 1400. In May, in-person inquiries jumped to 1200, letter/email to 1000, and telephone to 1600. Finally, in June, in-person inquiries peaked at 1400, letter/email at 1200, and telephone at 1800.

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The given line graph depicts the amount of enquiries obtained by the Tourist Information centre through various methods such as in person, by letter/email and by telephone in one particular town between January and June in 2011.

In an overview, it is clear that individuals who contacted the information center in person and through postcards or email depicted a strategical rise. However people who enquired via telephone illustrated a decreasing trend.

A closer analysis of the graph illustrates that the overall figure of visitors who use their cellphone for collecting information from the office in the first month of January was almost 900. Subsequently it witnessed a gradual decreasing and reached below 400 in May and it remained constant throught the remaining period.

Around 800 enquiries were received through letter or email in the beginning of January latter it observed a minimal decline and marked exact 800 in February. However it observed a significant rose and attained 1600 enquiries in June.

In the beginning of January rate of public who collected information directly from the centre was 400. Eventually it witnessed a strategical growth and achived almost 2000 in figure.

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains significant inaccuracies regarding the data trends. While the report identifies the three categories, the description of the trends contradicts the visual information provided (for example, stating that telephone enquiries decreased when they actually increased, and misreporting the starting and ending values for all categories). To improve, ensure that the direction of trends (increase, decrease, or stability) accurately reflects the visual data and that the numerical values cited are consistent with the graph. Focus on grouping data logically and ensuring the overview accurately summarizes the main trends.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a standard structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, the progression of ideas is occasionally disrupted by awkward phrasing and logical inconsistencies. While you use some cohesive devices (e.g., 'Subsequently', 'However'), they are not always used effectively to link ideas smoothly. To improve, focus on using a wider variety of transition signals and ensure that each paragraph has a clear, logical flow that guides the reader through the data trends.

Lexical Resource

There is an attempt to use varied vocabulary (e.g., 'depicts', 'witnessed', 'attained'), but there are several instances of incorrect word choices and awkward collocations. For example, 'strategical rise' and 'strategical growth' are not natural English expressions in this context; 'steady increase' or 'significant growth' would be more appropriate. Additionally, 'amount of enquiries' should be 'number of enquiries' as enquiries are countable. Aim to learn more precise academic collocations for describing trends.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that impact readability. There are issues with subject-verb agreement, tense consistency, and sentence structure (e.g., 'latter it observed' instead of 'later, it observed'). There are also errors in word forms, such as using 'rose' (a verb) where a noun like 'rise' is required. To improve, practice complex sentence structures and pay close attention to the distinction between nouns and verbs when describing changes in data.

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