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Band 6+: The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and number of shops that are newly opened in one country between 2011 to 2018. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparison where relevant

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The image displays a line graph titled "Number of shop closures and openings 2011-2018" with two data series: closures (solid line) and openings (dotted line). Closures: 2011 - 6,000, 2012 - 4,500, 2013 - 5,000, 2014 - 8,000, 2015 - 4,500, 2016 - 5,000, 2017 - 7,000, 2018 - 5,000. Openings: 2011 - 4,000, 2012 - 3,000, 2013 - 2,500, 2014 - 6,000, 2015 - 4,000, 2016 - 3,000, 2017 - 4,500, 2018 - 3,500.

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This graph shows a time series representation of newly opened shops versus closed shops throughout 8 years. The highest number of opened shops was around 8500 shops in 2011, which drastically decreased to nearly 4000 in 2012. The lowest number of opened shops was around 3000 shops in 2018.

As for the number of closed shops, it has not seen too much fluctuation from 2011 to 2014 where it ranged from 6000 to 7000. In 2015, a suden decrease of the number of closed shops happened to reach 600 shops aproximately. After that, the trend returned to stabilize around 5000 closed shops per year from 2016 till 2018.

The break even point happened in 2014 when the number of closed shops nearly equalized the number of newly opened shop. However, the next year witnessed the biggest difference between those two numbers.

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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

shops: 11

number: 6

closed: 5

opened: 4

around: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to describe the main trends in the graph but contains significant inaccuracies in the data reported. The description of the trends is also somewhat unclear and lacks specific comparisons. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the data and making clear comparisons between the number of shops opening and closing. Also, ensure that you cover the entire time period and highlight key turning points or significant changes. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report presents a general overview of the data but lacks a clear structure and flow. The information is not always presented in a logical order, and the connections between sentences and paragraphs could be stronger. For instance, the description of opened shops and closed shops are separated into different paragraphs, which makes it difficult to compare the trends. Consider using cohesive devices to link ideas and improve the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a limited range of vocabulary, and some word choices are not entirely accurate. For example, 'suaden decrease' should be 'sudden decrease'. To improve, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to trends and changes, such as 'fluctuated', 'peaked', 'declined', and 'remained stable'. Also, ensure that the vocabulary used is appropriate for describing numerical data. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and inaccuracies. For example, 'The highest number of opened shops was around 8500 shops in 2011' is inaccurate based on the visual description, and there are issues with verb tense and subject-verb agreement. To improve, carefully proofread your work for grammatical errors and pay attention to sentence structure and verb tense consistency. Also, ensure that your descriptions accurately reflect the data presented in the graph.

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