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The image depicts percentages from 1980 to 2010; Aquarium: 1980-10%, 1985-20%, 1990-15%, 1995-20%, 2000-15%, 2005-20%, 2010-15%; Castle: 1980-30%, 1985-45%, 1990-30%, 1995-35%, 2000-30%, 2005-25%, 2010-10%; Zoo: 1980-20%, 1985-15%, 1990-30%, 1995-25%, 2000-20%, 2005-20%, 2010-30%; Festival: 1980-35%, 1985-30%, 1990-40%, 1995-30%, 2000-35%, 2005-35%, 2010-20%.

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The line graph gives detailed information about the percentage of tourists that visited to various types of attractions in Scotland from 1980 to 2010.

Overall, it is clear that most visitors from abroad chose to go to Castle, while only few prefered to go to Zoo in the period given in the graph.

At first the percentage of visitors that prefered the Castle was lower than those who chosed festivals in 1980. However, this was not the case after 1990, because the figure that shows the percenatge of tourists that chose to go to the Castle never dropped lower than 35 percent of attendence. The figure that shows the percentage of people visited to aquarium saw a sharp increase in 1985 and experienced a sharp decrease after that, which is why it beacame only 10 percent in 2010.

The number of tourists visited to festivals saw a slight decrease from 30 percent to 20 percent in the 30 years period. Tourists that preffered to go to Zoo was only 10 percent in 1980, it saw slight drops and increases from 1980 to 200. After that it increased dramatically with 10 percent more people in 2010. In 2005, the figures of tourists that visited to zoo and aquarium touched. The similar situation was seen from 1980 to 1990, between the figures that show the percentage of visitors that preffered to go to Castle, aquarium and festival.

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percent: 6

tourists: 5

percentage: 4

visited: 4

castle: 4

visitors: 3

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aquarium: 3

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The report attempts to address the task and covers all categories mentioned in the visual description. However, there are significant issues with data accuracy and logical consistency. For example, the report claims the Castle never dropped below 35%, which contradicts the data provided, and it misrepresents the starting percentage for the Zoo. Additionally, some descriptions of trends (such as 'sharp increase' or 'dramatic increase') are not well-supported by the actual numerical changes. To improve, focus on ensuring that the trends described accurately reflect the numbers provided and ensure that comparisons between categories are logically sound.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, the progression of ideas is sometimes difficult to follow due to awkward phrasing and imprecise linking. Some sentences are overly long and convoluted, which hinders the flow. To improve, focus on using clearer cohesive devices and ensure that each sentence contributes directly to the comparison of trends. Avoid using 'which is why' to explain trends, as Task 1 requires description rather than speculation on causality.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is somewhat limited and repetitive (e.g., frequent use of 'the figure that shows the percentage of'). There are several spelling errors such as 'prefered', 'chosed', 'percenatge', 'beacame', and 'preffered'. Additionally, some word choices are inaccurate, such as 'attendance' or 'touched' (instead of 'intersected' or 'met'). Aim to use a wider variety of synonyms for 'tourists' (e.g., visitors, travelers, holidaymakers) and 'show' (e.g., illustrate, depict, represent) to enhance the lexical range.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are frequent grammatical errors that occasionally impede communication. Issues include incorrect preposition usage (e.g., 'visited to'), subject-verb agreement errors (e.g., 'Tourists... was'), and tense inconsistencies. The sentence structures are often repetitive or grammatically flawed (e.g., 'it saw slight drops and increases from 1980 to 200'). Work on mastering complex sentence structures and ensuring that verb tenses are used consistently to describe past trends.

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