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Band 7+: The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

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The image charts the percentage of the population aged 65 and older spanning ninety years (1940-2040) in Japan, Sweden, and the USA. Japan's population aged 65+ started at 5% in 1940, hit 10% by 1990, and is projected to reach 30% by 2040. Sweden's proportion began at 7% in 1940, reaching 17% by 1990, and anticipating 25% by 2040. The USA's percentage commenced at 8% in 1940, achieving 13% by 1990, and expecting to hit nearly 23% by 2040.

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The line graph compares three countries (Japan, Sweden, and USA) in terms of proportion of the elderly population aged 65 and over, from 1940 to 2040.

Overall, despite some fluctuations, proportions for all three countries present a constant and steady growth over the period.

In 1940, the USA had the highest proportion of elderly people, at just under 10%, and was the leading country at the beginning. Sweden followed with 6% of its population aged 65 and over. The figures for USA and Sweden gradually converge, at approximately 15% by 1980. After this point, Sweden continued to grow and reached about 20% by 2020, while USA remained relatively stable over the next two decades. By 2040, the proportion of people aged 65 and over in the USA expected to grow to around 24%.

Meanwhile, Japan which had the lowest proportion at 5% in 1940, experienced a gradual decline to about 3% by 1990. However, after this point, the figure began to increase steadily, reaching round 10% by 2030, and then rising sharply to 23% in 2040, becoming the leader among the two countries.

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The report covers the requirements of the task, providing a general overview and some specific data points. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported (e.g., Japan's decline to 3% by 1990 is incorrect). To improve, ensure all data cited is accurate and consider including more comparative statements to highlight the differences and similarities between the countries' trends.

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The report is generally well-organized and easy to follow. The overall structure is clear, with a good introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs. Transitions between sentences and ideas are mostly smooth. To improve coherence, ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single, clear aspect of the data. For instance, you could dedicate separate paragraphs to describing the trends of each country individually before comparing them.

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The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary suitable for describing trends and comparisons. Terms like 'fluctuations,' 'steady growth,' 'gradually converge,' and 'relatively stable' are used effectively. To further enhance the lexical resource, consider incorporating more varied synonyms and idiomatic expressions related to demographic trends. For example, instead of 'steady growth,' you could use 'consistent increase' or 'gradual ascent.'

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The report demonstrates a good command of grammar with a variety of sentence structures. There are only minor grammatical errors. To improve further, pay close attention to the accuracy of prepositions and articles, and ensure subject-verb agreement throughout the report. Reviewing and correcting these small errors can significantly enhance the overall quality of your writing.

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