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Band 5+: The graph below shows the result of a survey of patients who stayed in three different wards* of a hospital. It shows what percentage of the patients replied 'very good' about various aspects of their hospital experience. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons wherever relevant.

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The image displays a bar graph comparing the percentage of patients who replied "very good" about their hospital experience by three different wards: Holly, Maple, and Oak, across four categories. For 'Hospital staff', Holly Ward is at 60%, Maple Ward at 50%, and Oak Ward at 70%. 'Waiting time' shows Holly at around 40%, Maple at 30%, and Oak at 30%. 'Quality of treatment' has Holly at 90%, Maple at 80%, and Oak at near 100%. Lastly, 'Quality of aftercare' depicts Holly at 80%, Maple at 70%, and Oak at 90%.

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This chart illustrate how the percentage of patients rating three different ward across four categories, as ‘Very good’.

Overall, Holy ward rating surpasses relatively other wards. Conversely, maple ward rating is lower than the other wards but Oak ward is between the other two, according to ratings.

90% patient rates quality of treatment of holy wards but for waiting time it is approximately 75%.Additionaly, for hospital staff and quality of aftercare 88% people rate these categories. On the other hand, 70% patient give rating to quality of treatment for maple ward which is slightly lower than Oak ward ratings.For waiting time, Maple ward and Oak ward ratings are approximately same but for hospital staff and quality of aftercare Oak ward Surpass to Maple ward.

From all four categories of holy ward, only waiting time is lower against the other categories of holy ward but it is again higher than the waiting time rating of maple and Oak ward.

To sum up, according to Patient rateings Holy ward is in the top in all four divisions against the other two

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other: 6

rating: 5

maple: 5

categories: 4

quality: 4

waiting: 4

wards: 3

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The report identifies some overall trends and makes some comparisons, but it contains inaccuracies and lacks specific data support. The organization is somewhat unclear, and the language contains errors. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data with specific percentages, organizing the information more logically (e.g., by category or ward), and using more precise language.

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The report's structure is somewhat unclear, and the flow of information is not always smooth. The organization into paragraphs could be improved to better group related ideas. Transitions between sentences and paragraphs are often abrupt, making it difficult for the reader to follow the comparisons and overall trends. For example, the shift from discussing Holly Ward to Maple and Oak Wards feels disjointed. Consider using more cohesive devices (e.g., conjunctions, pronouns, synonyms) to link ideas and improve the overall flow.

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The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. There is an attempt to use comparative language, but it is not always accurate or effective. For instance, phrases like 'surpasses relatively other wards' and 'between the other two' are vague and could be expressed more clearly. To improve, focus on using more specific and varied vocabulary to describe the data and comparisons. For example, instead of 'lower than the other wards,' consider using 'significantly lower' or 'the lowest among the three wards.'

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The report contains numerous grammatical errors that affect clarity. Subject-verb agreement issues, incorrect tense usage, and awkward phrasing are prevalent throughout the text. For example, 'This chart illustrate' should be 'This chart illustrates,' and '90% patient rates' should be '90% of patients rate.' There are also issues with article usage and sentence structure. To improve, carefully proofread your work and focus on mastering basic grammar rules. Consider using a grammar checker and seeking feedback from others to identify and correct errors.

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