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Band 5+: The graph below shows Twitter use by age group in the USA between November 2010 and May 2013. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image depicts a line graph showing Twitter use by age group in the USA from 10/10 to 05/13. Age group 18-29: 14% (10/10), 16% (10/11), 20% (11/11), 24% (05/12), 27% (10/12), 28% (12/12), 30% (05/13). Age group 30-49: 8% (10/10), 10% (10/11), 11% (11/11), 14% (05/12), 15% (10/12), 17% (12/12), 17% (05/13). Age group 50-64: 6% (10/10), 7% (10/11), 7% (11/11), 8% (05/12), 9% (10/12), 12% (12/12), 13% (05/13). Age group 65+: 4% (10/10), fluctuating between 3%-4% from 10/11 to 05/13.

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The line graph illustrates user’s age of Twitter from November 2010 to May 2013

Overall, the graph shows that people in age 65 and more remained steady. Number of people 50-64 and 30-49 years old experienced an upward trend. Users between 18 and 29 years old demonstrated a fluctuation.

To begin with, significant majority of users Twitter is young generation. In November 2010 they had the lowest peak of using, almost 14%. In contrary, in August 2012 they shown an increase and made up 33%. But then declined again. Alternatively, people are the smallest fraction on the graph. From November 2010 to January 2011 they demonstrated steady decrease. The highest percent (5,1%) was shown in May 2011. After that, this portion had a slight indicators.

Majority of people 30-49 and 50-64 years old have a similar dynamics. Both of them had the lowest results in November 2010 and the highest in May 2013

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Task Response

The report covers the main trends in the graph, but there are some inaccuracies in the data reported. For example, the 18-29 age group did not reach 33% in August 2012, and the 65+ age group did not show a steady decrease from November 2010 to January 2011. Also, the report could be improved by providing more specific data points and making more comparisons between the age groups. To improve, ensure data accuracy and include more specific details and comparisons.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates some organization, but the progression of ideas is not always clear. The 'Overall' paragraph provides a general overview, but the subsequent paragraphs lack clear topic sentences and transitions. The use of cohesive devices is limited, and some connections between sentences are weak, making it harder for the reader to follow the argument. Paragraphing could be improved to group related ideas more effectively. For example, the description of the 65+ age group feels disjointed. To improve coherence, focus on creating clearer transitions between paragraphs and ensuring that each paragraph has a central idea that is consistently developed.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a reasonable range of vocabulary, but there are instances where the word choice could be more precise. For example, 'significant majority' is a bit awkward, and 'in contrary' is not the correct phrase. There are also some inaccuracies in describing the data, such as stating the peak for the 18-29 age group was in 'August 2012' and '33%' (the graph indicates May 2013 and 30%). To improve lexical resource, focus on using more precise vocabulary related to describing trends and data, and double-check the accuracy of the information presented. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Examples include incorrect verb tenses ('people in age 65 and more remained steady'), incorrect preposition use ('users Twitter'), and awkward phrasing ('people are the smallest fraction on the graph'). Sentence structure is generally simple, and there is limited use of complex sentences. To improve grammatical range and accuracy, focus on reviewing basic grammar rules, particularly verb tenses, prepositions, and article usage. Practice constructing more complex sentences to express ideas more effectively.

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