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Band 4+: The graph below shows UK acid rain emissions, measured in millions of tonnes, from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007

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The image shows a line graph displaying UK acid rain emissions from 1991 to 2007, measured in million tonnes; transport and communication (peaking at 3.5 in 1991 and dropping to around 2.5 in 2007), other industries (starting at nearly 1.5, dipping to 0.5 in 2001, and rising slightly after), electricity, gas and water supply (beginning at just above 2.5 and descending steadily to just below 1), and domestic (consistently around 0.5 throughout).

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The line chart compares the amount of Acid rain emmited from four different sectors in the UK from 1990 to 2007.

It is clear that the total quantity of Acid rain decreased in the uk during thr period 1990 to 2007. Meanwhile, electrycity gas and water supply saw the biggest fail in emissions over the period.

In 1900, Acid rain emissions from electrycity, gas and water supply bwas the highest, at around 3 million tonnes, in the same year, just over 2m , tonners of acid rain emmitted from other indruatries, Trasport and communication sector and domestic sector. on the other hand, each provided around 0.6 millions tonners of acid rain in the UK.

Between, 1990 and 2007 , The amount of acid rain emmited from electricity, gas and water supply decliend to 0.5 million tonnes in 2007. A fail of nearly 3 million tonners in 17 yeras. while there was an acid rain emission from transport and communication sector peacked at 1 million tonnes in 2005. the figure for other indrustries and domestic sector decreased to approximatly 1.2 million tonners. resceptively

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The report addresses the main trends and attempts to provide data for all sectors, but there are significant issues with data accuracy and clarity. There are several factual contradictions; for example, the report states that transport and communication peaked at 1 million tonnes, whereas the visual description suggests it was much higher. Additionally, the description of the domestic sector and other industries at the end of the report is confusing and lacks precision. To improve, ensure that the data points cited directly correspond to the trends shown in the graph and focus on grouping information logically to avoid repetitive or contradictory statements.

Coherence & Cohesion

The organization of ideas is somewhat logical, but the progression is frequently interrupted by punctuation errors and sentence fragments. For example, several sentences are joined incorrectly or lack proper capitalization, which disrupts the flow of information. To improve, ensure that each sentence is a complete thought and use a wider variety of cohesive devices (e.g., 'In contrast,' 'Furthermore,' 'Subsequently') to link your observations more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

There is a limited range of vocabulary, and frequent spelling errors (e.g., 'emmited', 'electrycity', 'indruatries', 'tonners', 'resceptively') occur throughout the report. These errors, while sometimes understandable, detract from the professional tone required. Focus on learning the correct spelling of common academic and technical terms used in data description, and try to use more varied synonyms for 'decrease' and 'increase' to avoid repetition.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical accuracy is a significant issue. There are numerous errors in subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'emissions... bwas'), tense usage, and sentence structure. Many sentences are run-on sentences or fragments. Additionally, capitalization is inconsistent (e.g., 'uk', 'Acid'). To improve, practice constructing simple and complex sentences with correct punctuation and ensure that your subjects and verbs always agree in number.

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