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Band 6+: The graph gives information about male and female gym membership between 1980 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a line graph titled "Gym Membership" with two lines representing "men" in blue and "women" in orange, measured on a vertical axis from 0 to 6000 and a horizontal axis from 1980 to 2010. Men's line starts at approximately 1000, peaks around 5000 in 1985, dips to 2000 in 1995, and peaks again at nearly 6000 in 2005 before falling. Women's line begins just above 1000, gradually rises to around 3000 in 2005, then declines.

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The following report presents the information of male and female gym membership between 1980 and 2010.

Overall, this graph shows that men had a higher rate of having a gym membership than women. Between the years 1990 and 2000, it can be seen that women gym membership take the first place from men gym membership. After about 2005-2010, this same dynamic continued.

Specifically, men gym membership had its peak in 2005 with a rate of 5000. Starting from 1980, it had a rather linear increase and during 1985 that increase let its place to become stable. After about 1987, it started to decrease dramatically and once again continued a stable path until 2000. It had its dip in the end of 2010s with a number less than 1000.

In contrast, women gym membership had rather uncertain and several dips and peaks compared to men’s. The highest rate that belong to women is near 3000 in 1995 and the lowest is about 1000 in 1980.

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membership: 6

women: 4

about: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task, but there are some inaccuracies and omissions. For example, the report states that women's gym membership took the first place from men's between 1990 and 2000, which is not supported by the graph. Additionally, the report does not provide a clear overview of the main trends and changes in the graph.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The report is mostly coherent, but there are some issues with cohesion. The paragraphs do not flow smoothly, and some sentences are not well-connected. The use of transitional phrases and linking words is limited.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The report uses a range of vocabulary, but there are some inaccuracies and limitations. For example, the phrase 'take the first place from' is not idiomatic, and the word 'uncertain' is not accurately used to describe the women's gym membership trend.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

The report demonstrates a range of grammatical structures, but there are some errors and inaccuracies. For example, the sentence 'After about 2005-2010, this same dynamic continued' is not grammatically correct, and there are some issues with verb tense consistency.

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