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The image depicts the yearly income in dollars from 2000 to 2010 for three bakeries. In 2000, Amandine Bakery earned $40,000, Mari Bakeshop $55,000, and Bolo Cakery $20,000. In 2001, their incomes were $40,000, $65,000, and $40,000, respectively. In 2002, earnings were $40,000 for Amandine, $80,000 for Mari, and $40,000 for Bolo. In 2003, Amandine stayed at $40,000, Mari earned $80,000, and Bolo gained $50,000. Amandine earned $40,000 in 2004, while Mari earned $80,000, and Bolo earned $50,000. By 2005, Amandine's income rose to $50,000, Mari's declined to $60,000, and Bolo remained at $50,000. In 2006, Amandine earned $55,000, Mari $60,000, and Bolo $60,000. In 2007, Amandine reached $90,000, Mari stayed at $60,000, Bolo also remained at $60,000. Incomes in 2008 were Amandine $100,000, Mari $60,000, Bolo $50,000. In 2009, Amandine remained at $100,000, Mari at $60,000, and Bolo at $60,000. Amandine's income was $105,000 in 2010, while Mari increased to $80,000, with Bolo stable at $70,000.

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The chart demonstrates yearly revenue in between 2000 and 2010 of three bakeries in Calgary.

What stands out is, in early 2000s the Mari Bakeshop was performing highest in income generated, and there after the Amandine Bakery became one of the leading bakeries in annual earnings by end of 2010. Noticably the Bolo Cakery improved in total profits produced during this period.

Focusing on the Amandine Bakery, they were making around $55000 from start of 2000 to last of 2005. Later they had a gradual steep spike in gross gains to $105000 by the 2010. following on the Bolo Cakery was initialy at $20000 in 2000s, with small fluctuations raising up to $38000 by 2003, then rising up to $65000 by finish of 2010.

As for the Mari Bakery, the turnover were fluctuating from begining of 2000 to 2005 in and around $80000 to $85000, then falling deep to $40000 by the 2010.

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Task Response

The report generally addresses the task by describing the trends of the three bakeries over the given period. However, there are several inaccuracies in the data (e.g., Amandine's early earnings, Bolo's values, Mari's decline) and some irrelevant or imprecise descriptions (e.g., 'gradual steep spike', 'falling deep to $40000'). The structure is present but could be clearer, and the language contains errors that affect clarity. To improve, focus on accurately reporting key figures and trends, use more precise vocabulary, and ensure the report is well-organized with clear overview and detailed paragraphs.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a basic structure with an introduction and separate paragraphs for each bakery, but the flow is disrupted by unclear phrasing and some lapses in logical progression. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate (e.g., 'there after', 'following on'). To improve, focus on using a wider range of linking words and phrases to connect ideas more smoothly, and ensure each paragraph has a clear central topic. Organize the information more logically, perhaps by comparing trends across the bakeries rather than describing each one in isolation.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task but lacks range and precision. There are some inappropriate word choices (e.g., 'steep spike', 'gross gains', 'falling deep') and repetition of basic terms like 'rising up'. To improve, use more varied and accurate vocabulary to describe trends (e.g., 'increased steadily', 'peaked at', 'experienced a decline'). Avoid informal or incorrect phrases and aim for more natural and sophisticated lexical control.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and awkward constructions that affect clarity. Issues include incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement errors (e.g., 'the turnover were fluctuating'), and missing or incorrect prepositions. Sentence structures are often simple or fragmented. To improve, practice using a wider range of sentence structures accurately, pay attention to subject-verb agreement, and proofread for common errors. Using more complex sentences with appropriate punctuation would enhance the overall quality.

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