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Band 5+: The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in Calgary, 2000-2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents a line graph detailing yearly income in dollars from 2000 to 2010 for three entities: Amandine Bakery, Mari Bakeshop, and Bolo Cakery. In 2000: Amandine Bakery $55,000, Mari Bakeshop $75,000, Bolo Cakery $20,000. In 2001: Amandine Bakery $60,000, Mari Bakeshop $70,000, Bolo Cakery $25,000. In 2002: Amandine Bakery $55,000, Mari Bakeshop $85,000, Bolo Cakery $30,000. In 2003: Amandine Bakery $60,000, Mari Bakeshop $80,000, Bolo Cakery $35,000. In 2004: Amandine Bakery $65,000, Mari Bakeshop $75,000, Bolo Cakery $35,000. In 2005: Amandine Bakery $60,000, Mari Bakeshop $80,000, Bolo Cakery $40,000. In 2006: Amandine Bakery $65,000, Mari Bakeshop $70,000, Bolo Cakery $45,000. In 2007: Amandine Bakery $70,000, Mari Bakeshop $60,000, Bolo Cakery $50,000. In 2008: Amandine Bakery $90,000, Mari Bakeshop $50,000, Bolo Cakery $50,000. In 2009: Amandine Bakery $100,000, Mari Bakeshop $50,000, Bolo Cakery $55,000. In 2010: Amandine Bakery $110,000, Mari Bakeshop $50,000, Bolo Cakery $60,000.

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The graph illustrates information regarding the yearly income of Amadine Bakery, Mari Bakeshop and Bolo cakery between 2000-2016 in ten years which is located in Calgary. It shows that fluctuations the Amadine Bakery has progressed over the ten years in terms of earning compared to other two bakeries.

In 40 years, in 2000 AD, Mari Bakeshop had the highest income but after 2005, it depleted and became the lowest earning whereas the Amandine Bakery was consistent through the first five years but suddenly skyrocketed after 2005. Bolo Cakery started from minimum earning, it was consistent as well and gained after 10 years so, the progress was seen in Amendine Bakery and Bolo cakery whereas Mari Bakeshop had a major downfall to this scenario.

The progress trend was seen in two bakeries and one bakery gone through downfall after 10 years.

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years: 6

bakery: 5

after: 4

bakeshop: 3

cakery: 3

earning: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains inaccuracies and lacks specific data to support the general trends mentioned. The time frame is incorrectly stated as 2000-2016 and 'in 40 years' is nonsensical. Key points are vague and not well-supported by the graph's data. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data, providing specific figures to illustrate trends, and ensuring correct time references. Also, avoid overly general statements and aim for more precise descriptions of the changes and comparisons between the bakeries. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report's coherence is affected by some unclear phrasing and inaccurate time references. For example, the introduction mentions '2000-2016 in ten years,' which is contradictory. The phrase 'In 40 years, in 2000 AD' is also confusing and inaccurate. To improve coherence, ensure that time references are accurate and consistent throughout the report. Use clear transition words to connect ideas and maintain a logical flow. Paragraphing could be improved by focusing each paragraph on a specific aspect or period of the data.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary related to trends, such as 'fluctuations,' 'depleted,' 'skyrocketed,' and 'downfall.' However, the range of vocabulary could be expanded to provide a more detailed and nuanced description of the data. For example, instead of just saying 'consistent,' you could use words like 'stable,' 'steady,' or 'maintained.' Consider using more precise language to describe the degree of change, such as 'significant increase,' 'gradual decline,' or 'remained relatively constant.' Also, ensure that the vocabulary is used accurately and appropriately in context.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, 'It shows that fluctuations the Amadine Bakery has progressed' is grammatically incorrect. The sentence structure needs to be revised for better clarity. Also, 'Bolo Cakery started from minimum earning' is not idiomatic; consider rephrasing it to 'Bolo Cakery started with the lowest earnings.' Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and accurate use of articles and prepositions. Proofreading carefully for grammatical errors will significantly improve the report's overall quality.

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