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Band 6+: The graph shows the number of enquiries to the tourist information office made by telephone, letter/email, and in person from January 2001 to June 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image features a line graph titled "Number of enquiries to Tourist Information Office" with the vertical y-axis scaled from 0 to 1400 in increments of 200, and the horizontal x-axis displaying six months: Jan, Feb, Mar, Apr, May, and Jun. A legend identifies three categories: "in person" (dashed line), "by telephone" (dotted line), and "by email/letter" (solid line). For "in person", values across the months are: Jan at 400, Feb at approximately 600, Mar at approximately 860, Apr at approximately 900, May at approximately 1120, and Jun at 1200. For "by telephone", values are: Jan at 800, Feb at approximately 750, Mar at 800, Apr at 800, May at approximately 950, and Jun at approximately 1100. For "by email/letter", values are: Jan at 600, Feb at approximately 570, Mar at approximately 570, Apr at approximately 470, May at approximately 420, and Jun at 200.

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The graph shows the enquiries to a tourists information office by email / letter, by telephone, and in persons in the first six months of the year 2001.

Overall, the number of inquiries that made in person increased throughout the period. In contrast the enquiries made by emails and letters decreased over time.

In January the number of inquiries received by the tourist information office by telephone were the highest, recording 800 calls, after that the number was stable until April when it increased sharply to 1100 in June.

Prople who contacted the office directly recorded the lowest number in January at 400 people, then the number increased significantly, reaching 850 in March, then stabled for a short period to increase agian in April until the end of the period which was at the top, recording 1200 visits.

In contrast inquiries by emails and letters decreased throughout the period. Although the number was stable in the first three months, recording 600 messages, it fallen down to 400 in May, and declined to 300 in June.

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by presenting an overview and describing the main trends for each enquiry method. It correctly identifies the overall increase in in-person enquiries and the decrease in email/letter enquiries, and it makes some comparisons. However, there are a few inaccuracies and omissions: the telephone enquiries are described as stable until April, but the data shows a slight dip in February; the email/letter figures are not entirely accurate (e.g., the final value is given as 300 instead of 200, and the May value is approximated). Additionally, some phrasing is informal or contains minor errors (e.g., 'in persons', 'stabled', 'agian'). To improve, ensure data points are reported more precisely and use more formal academic language.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction and separate paragraphs for each category. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear references (e.g., 'after that the number was stable until April when it increased sharply to 1100 in June' could be clearer). The use of cohesive devices is basic, and some sentences are long and run-on, making the message harder to follow. To improve, use clearer topic sentences and ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea, with smooth transitions between sentences and paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, with some good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'enquiries' vs 'inquiries', 'increased significantly', 'declined'). However, there are some inaccuracies and limited range (e.g., 'stabled' instead of 'stabilized', 'agian' instead of 'again', 'in persons' instead of 'in person'). The report would benefit from a wider range of precise vocabulary to describe trends (e.g., 'plateaued', 'peaked', 'fluctuated') and more accurate word forms. Also, ensure consistent use of terms (e.g., 'email/letter' vs 'emails and letters').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. For example, subject-verb agreement ('the number of inquiries that made in person' should be 'that were made'), incorrect verb forms ('it fallen down' should be 'it fell down'), and missing articles/prepositions. There are also run-on sentences and comma splices. To improve, focus on sentence structure, use a variety of complex sentences, and proofread for common errors. Pay attention to tense consistency and correct use of passive voice where appropriate.

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