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Band 6+: The graph shows the percentage of males aged 16-25 in a particular country who prefer watching sports to males who prefer participating in sports. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image is a bar chart showing percentages for Watching and Participating in various sports. The data is as follows: Football (Watching: 45%, Participating: 10%), Rugby (Watching: 30%, Participating: 20%), Basketball (Watching: 38%, Participating: 25%), Badminton (Watching: 29%, Participating: 25%), Fishing (Watching: 15%, Participating: 50%), and Horse riding and racing (Watching: 45%, Participating: 18%).

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The bar chart illustrates how many boys prefer to watch and to participating in sports. The data is collected and demonstrated in percentage.

Overall, most people choose to take part in fishing while most of them have a tendency to watch others playing football and horse riding and racing. Additionally, the proportion of people watching rugby, basketball, and badminton is slighly higher than those who join in those sports. That gap between football, horse riding and racing is significantly wider.

Regarding slight features, around 38% people choose to play basketball, far away those participate in this sport, only about 25%. This is followed by rugby, the gap between watching people and those who are players is 10%. Badminton recored the marginal gap, by around 2%.

50% people going to fish is considerably higher than those who choose to watch, just about 15%. Approximately 45% people want to watch football and horse riding and racing rather than become players in those sports.

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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

people: 6

those: 6

watch: 4

sports: 3

choose: 3

football: 3

horse: 3

riding: 3

racing: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by providing an overview and comparing the data for watching versus participating in sports. The main features are identified, and comparisons are made. However, there are some inaccuracies in data interpretation (e.g., basketball watching percentage is stated as 38% but should be 38% watching, and the description of the gap for basketball is slightly off). Additionally, there are minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing (e.g., 'to participating', 'recored', 'slighly'). To improve, ensure data accuracy and refine language for clarity and precision.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, an overview paragraph, and two detailed paragraphs. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear references (e.g., 'Regarding slight features'). The paragraphing could be more logical, and the use of cohesive devices is somewhat basic. To improve, focus on creating smoother transitions between sentences and paragraphs, and ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for the task, with some good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'prefer to watch' vs. 'choose to take part in'). However, there are several errors and inappropriate word choices (e.g., 'slight features', 'far away those participate', 'recored'). The range of vocabulary is limited, and some terms are used repetitively. To improve, expand your vocabulary related to describing data (e.g., 'margin', 'difference', 'proportion') and ensure correct word forms and collocations.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a number of grammatical errors and awkward structures that affect clarity. Examples include 'to watch and to participating' (incorrect verb form), 'the proportion of people watching... is slighly higher than those who join in' (subject-verb agreement and phrasing), and 'far away those participate' (incorrect structure). Punctuation is also inconsistent. To improve, practice using a wider range of sentence structures accurately, and proofread carefully to eliminate basic errors in verb forms, articles, and prepositions.

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