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Band 5+: The graph shows the popularity of Pop Music in Asia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents a line graph titled "Pop Music Sales (in thousand units)" displaying sales data from 2000 to 2020; 2000: 0, 2005: approximately 25,000, 2010: around 30,000, 2015: about 25,000, 2020: roughly 110,000; noticeable trends include a steady rise from 2000 to 2005, slight increase to 2010, dip back to 2000 levels by 2015, followed by a sharp ascent leading to 2020 peak.

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The line graph iluustrates the popularuty of pop music in Asia from 2000 to 2020.

At the beginning, it can be seen that it was not so polular than over the time. Looking at the precentage of around 15% in 2000, the pop music was a new way of music. However, after a half of 1 decade, it showed a small rising about 35%. In addition, the growth was not continued, the precentage started declining to 15% again like at the starting, between 2007 and 2012. It can be caused by goverenment, since in those years were some arguments about location with USA as well as Russia. After a small fall, the popularity of pop music showed a real stability increasing with more 100%, so becomed the number one music style in Asia. It was incradible, that in 10 years and from 15% to 115%.

Overall, it was a real progress to the pop music in Asia over the time. Starting with a bit growth and declining and again significantly increasing, the precentage was a maximum.

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The report addresses the task by summarizing the main trends in the popularity of pop music in Asia from 2000 to 2020. However, there are inaccuracies in the data reported (e.g., percentages instead of units). The inclusion of external, unsupported explanations (government arguments) detracts from the focus. To improve, ensure accurate data representation and avoid introducing speculative information not derived from the graph.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates some attempt to organize the information, but the flow is frequently disrupted by grammatical errors and unclear phrasing. Paragraphing is present but could be used more effectively to group related ideas. To improve coherence, focus on using clear transition words and phrases to connect ideas and ensure that each sentence logically follows from the previous one. Also, ensure that each paragraph has a clear focus and that all sentences within the paragraph support that focus.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and occasionally inaccurate ('precentage' instead of 'percentage,' 'polular' instead of 'popular'). There is a need to expand the range of vocabulary to describe trends and changes more precisely. For example, instead of 'small rising,' consider using 'modest increase' or 'gradual climb.' To improve lexical resource, focus on learning synonyms and alternative ways to express common ideas related to describing graphs and trends. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

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The report contains numerous grammatical errors that impede understanding. Errors in spelling ('iluustrates,' 'popularuty'), verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and sentence structure are prevalent. The sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. To improve grammatical range and accuracy, focus on mastering basic grammar rules and sentence structures. Practice writing simple sentences and gradually increase complexity as your accuracy improves. Proofread carefully for errors in spelling, punctuation, and grammar.

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