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Band 5+: The graph shows the total number of books sold at three bookshops in Bayside City last year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a line graph titled "Books Sold in Bayside City" showing monthly data from January to December with three bookstores – Barnes & Noble, Cozy Corner, and Frugal Muse. Barnes & Noble's sales start at approximately 15,000 in January, steadily increase to peak near 40,000 in July, drop slightly in August, then climb to highest at over 40,000 in December. Cozy Corner begins around 22,500, sharply increases to 35,000 in February, zigzags down to 20,000 in April, peaks around 32,500 in June, falls to 15,000 in September, and ends near 25,000 in December. Frugal Muse has lowest sales, starting around 5,000 in January, with a minor increase to 7,500 in February, a sharp rise to 15,000 in June, remaining flat until a decrease to 10,000 in November, and a small rise to finish near 12,500 in December. The exact numbers for each point on the graph are not provided.

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The provided graph illustrastes the total books sold from three bookstores; Barnes & Noble, Cozy Corner and Frugal Muse in Bayside City. The horizontal axis represents the months, while the vertical axis presents the number of books respectivily.

Cozy Corner initated at below 20,000 books at the start of the year, whereas barnes & Noble started at about 24,000 books. Barnes & Noble gradually grew to 40,000 books at its peak, yet considerably dropped to 28,000 books. Meanwhile, Cozy Corner shows the fluctuation throughout from the Febuary to july. It rose to the top at about 34,000 books in july before noticebly dropped to above 20,000 and became stable at the end of the year.

The Frugal Muse started to sell at 5,000 books at January and two months later, it slightly increased to nearly 10,000 books. After March, it showed the decrease to about 1,000 books from March to May. After May, it began to moderately increased between 15,000 books to 20,000 books. By the December, it rocketed to above 35,000 books, becoming the highest selling bookshop among the three bookshops.

In conclusion, The Frugal Muse started being the lowest in january to the highest selling bookstore by the December.

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books: 13

barnes: 3

&: 3

noble: 3

corner: 3

frugal: 3

20000: 3

started: 3

about: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but includes some inaccuracies and misinterpretations of the data. Key points are sometimes inaccurate, which detracts from the overall task achievement. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data and avoid exaggerations or misstatements. Also, ensure that comparisons are relevant and supported by the graph.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an attempt to organize the information into paragraphs, but the flow of ideas could be improved. Transitions between sentences and paragraphs are sometimes abrupt, making it harder for the reader to follow the trends and comparisons. For example, the shift from Barnes & Noble to Cozy Corner in the second paragraph could be smoother. In the third paragraph, the description of Frugal Muse's sales has some confusing elements. The conclusion is not entirely supported by the data presented, as Frugal Muse does not become the highest-selling bookshop by December. To improve coherence, focus on creating clearer connections between sentences and ensuring that the conclusion accurately reflects the main trends in the data.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a limited range of vocabulary, with some inaccuracies in word choice (e.g., "initated," "respectivily"). There is also some repetition of words like "books" and "selling." To enhance lexical resource, try to incorporate a wider variety of vocabulary related to trends (e.g., "peaked," "fluctuated," "remained stable") and quantities (e.g., "approximately," "significantly," "marginally"). Pay attention to using the correct form of words and avoiding unnecessary repetition. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. These include incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. For example, "illustrastes" should be "illustrates," and there are issues with the use of articles and prepositions throughout the report. The sentence structure is relatively simple, which limits the ability to express more complex relationships between the data. To improve grammatical range and accuracy, focus on reviewing basic grammar rules, practicing sentence construction, and proofreading carefully for errors.

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