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Band 4+: The graphs below compare the number of cosmetic procedures performed on males and females in Korea in 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image includes two horizontal bar graphs titled "Cosmetic Surgery among Korean Women (2004)" and "Series 1: Cosmetic Surgery among Korean Men (2004)" with *Total Number of Procedures (000)* on the x-axis. The women's graph shows 5 surgery types, with Liposuction at approximately 390k, Breast Enlargement at 380k, Laser Skin Resurfacing at 180k, Rhinoplasty at 140k, and Eyelid Surgery at 320k. The men's graph displays 4 surgery types, with Abdominoplasty at around 80k, Rhinoplasty at 75k, Laser Skin Resurfacing at 50k, and Hair Transplantation at 10k.

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A glance at the two figures provided reveals the popularity of various forms of cosmetic surgery among man and woman in 2004

Not surprisingly, plastic surgery enjoyed widespread popularity among women. Eyelid surgery and Rhinoplasty were performed a staggering 320,000 and 270,000 times respectively. Third terms of popularity, meanwhile, Laser skin resurfacing. An approximately 210,000 times performed. Breast enlargement and Surgery type uposuction were considerably less common, at 150,000 and 125,000 operations respectively.

In comparison, Mens mostly enjoyed operation was Hair Transpilantation. There were just 60,000 of these operations among Korean males. Numbering some 55,000 procedures, laser skin resurfacing was second for this group. Third was Rhinoplasty, at approximately 40,000 operations. Finally, a relatively small 19,000 Abdominoplasty and 14,000 facelift procedures were carried out on men during 2004.

In conclusion, Womens undergo more plastic surgery than men

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