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Band 5+: The graphs below show the age of visitors from the UK to Spain in 1983 and 2003. Provide an overview of the information by identifying and describing the key details, and include comparisons where appropriate. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains two pie charts showing the age of visitors from the UK to Spain for the years 1983 and 2003, broken down into five age categories. In 1983, the visitor percentages by age were: 16-24 years, 60%; 25-34 years, 20%; 55+ years, 16%; 34-54 years, 10%; and 0-15 years, 4%. In 2003, the distribution was: 16-24 years, 36%; 55+ years, 26%; 0-15 years, 15%; 25-34 years, 12%; and 34-54 years, 12%.

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The pie chart depicts the percentage of age of visiter by age group from the UK to Spain between 1983 and 2003.

Overall, the proportion of the age of 0-15 years,16-24years and 55+ years who visiter from the UK witnessed upward trend, while that of 25-34 years and 34-54 year experienced reverse pattern throughout the period.

Regarding age of 0-15 years, 16-24 years and 55 years, they accounted for 10%, 4% and 16% receptively in 1983, after 20 year all three age group recorded remarkable increases, reaching 12%, 15% and 26% in the end.

In tern of age of 25-34 years, the proportion age of 25-34 years who visited from the Uk was 20% in 1983.Its then decreased significantly to 12% in 2003.

Concerning age of 34-54 years, the was the largest category AT 50% IN 1983, but it decline substantially to 35% IN 2003.

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years: 8

25-34: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task, but there are inaccuracies in the data reported and some issues with clarity. The overview is acceptable, but the body paragraphs contain some inaccurate information. For example, the 34-54 age group was not the largest category in 1983. To improve, ensure data accuracy and clarity in descriptions. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an attempt to organize the information, but the flow is disrupted by grammatical errors and unclear phrasing. Paragraphing is present but could be improved to better group related ideas. Use cohesive devices more effectively to link sentences and paragraphs, creating a smoother and more logical progression of ideas.

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The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and contains inaccuracies ('visiter' instead of 'visitor,' 'receptively' instead of 'respectively'). There is an attempt to use descriptive language, but the execution is not always accurate or effective. Expand your vocabulary and pay closer attention to word choice to convey precise meanings. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward sentence structures. These errors significantly impede understanding. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and sentence construction. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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