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Band 6+: The graphs indicate the source of complaints about the Bank of America and the amount of time it takes to have the complaints resolved. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image includes a pie chart and bar graph; the pie chart shows complaint sources: Public 63%, Insurance companies 11%, Media 10%, Government agencies 8%, Out of state 3%, Bank Employees 3%, Others 2%; the bar graph shows average investigation time in months: 2000 - 5, 2001 - 6, 2002 - 4, 2003 - 5, 2004 - 4.

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The pie chart depicts the composition of complaints about the bank of America, while the bar chart illustrates the average time between 2000 and 2004 to final action. Overall, it can be seen that the major source of complaints was the public.

The public made up almost two-thirds and was the most popular source of all. The next were goverment agencies and was approximately one in ten, while complainers in out of state was a minority. Other sources such as insurance companies, media, bank employers and others made up a very small number of complaints.

In 2000, the average time of data was about 5 months, while in 2001, the number of months were almost 6. In other three years as 2002, 2003 and 2004, the average quantity of months were about 4, respectively.

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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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about: 3

while: 3

average: 3

months: 3

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Task Response

The report adequately covers the main features of both charts, providing a general overview and some specific data points. However, there's room for improvement in terms of detail and comparison. To enhance the response, consider including more specific data from the pie chart, such as the exact percentages for insurance companies and media. Also, make more direct comparisons between the different sources of complaints and the investigation times across the years. For example, you could mention the range of investigation times or highlight the year with the longest and shortest average times. Improving the precision and depth of analysis will strengthen the report. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an adequate attempt to organize the information, but the flow could be improved. The organization into paragraphs is present, but the transitions between ideas within paragraphs are sometimes abrupt. For instance, the shift from discussing the public's complaints to government agencies and then to out-of-state complainers lacks a smooth transition. Consider using transition words or phrases to guide the reader more effectively. Also, ensure each paragraph focuses on a single, clear aspect of the data to enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally appropriate but lacks sophistication. There's reliance on simpler terms ('most popular,' 'very small number') where more precise or varied language could enhance the description. For example, instead of 'most popular,' consider 'predominant' or 'largest proportion.' Expanding the range of vocabulary and using more specific terms would improve the report. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Subject-verb agreement issues ('The next were goverment agencies') and incorrect preposition usage ('complainers in out of state') are present. Sentence structure could also be improved for better flow and accuracy. For example, the last sentence is somewhat awkward and could be rephrased for clarity. Focus on proofreading to eliminate these errors and vary sentence structures to enhance grammatical range.

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