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Band 5+: the graphs show information about visitors from France and North America for holiday and business purposes. Provide an overview of the information by indentifying and describing the key detail,a nd include comparisons where appropriate.

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The image displays two line graphs, 'Holiday visits to UK' and 'Business visits to UK', quantifying visits in millions from France and N. America over four quarterly periods. Holiday visits from France were sequentially: 1.0m (Jan to Mar), 1.4m (Apr to June), 1.6m (July to Sep), and 0.9m (Oct to Dec). Holiday visits from N. America were: 0.75m (Jan to Mar), 2.5m (Apr to June), 3.0m (July to Sep), and 1.1m (Oct to Dec). For business visits, figures from France were: 0.05m (Jan to Mar), 0.2m (Apr to June), 0.1m (July to Sep), and 0.15m (Oct to Dec). Business visits from N. America were: 0.15m (Jan to Mar), 0.3m (Apr to June), 0.2m (July to Sep), and 0.33m (Oct to Dec).

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The given graphs illustrate the data on tours from France and North America for weekend and business reasons.

Overall, it is evident that trips to UK for holiday purposes is the highest from North American visitors, whereas from France the proportion of people visit is lowest. In terms of Business trips, both France and North America, the proportion of people visit is considerably low.

In terms of holiday visit to UK, from January to March visitors from N. America, which is around 1.25 almost same as the figure for people from France. From April to June, visitors from N. America increase considerably and which is nearly 2.35, whereas it is around 1.25 for France. There is a biggest jump in the tourist from N. America it went to 3 billion in July to September session in comparison with it is 1.5 billion tourists for France. However, the proportion of visitors dropped from both France and N. America, and it reached to a low of 0.85 million and 1 million respectively.

In terms of Business visits from UK, N. America and France, both in there countries visitors increase by 1 billion from January to March session. This trend continue until June. There was a downfall from both of the countries approximately 1 billon tourist. While in October to December tourists from France decrease and reach to nearly 0.175 million, it is almost 0.325 million tourist from N. America.

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france: 9

america: 8

visitors: 5

million: 4

north: 3

business: 3

proportion: 3

people: 3

visit: 3

terms: 3

there: 3

tourist: 3

billion: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by providing an overview and describing key trends in both holiday and business visits. However, there are several inaccuracies in the data (e.g., misreporting figures and using 'billion' instead of 'million'), and some descriptions are vague or unclear. The structure is logical, but the language could be more precise and formal. To improve, ensure accurate data representation, use correct units, and avoid informal phrases like 'biggest jump' or 'downfall'. Also, make comparisons clearer and more explicit.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and separate paragraphs for holiday and business visits. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by unclear referencing and awkward phrasing. For example, 'the proportion of people visit is lowest' and 'there is a biggest jump in the tourist from N. America' could be expressed more clearly. The use of cohesive devices is limited, and some sentences are overly long or run-on, which affects readability. To improve, use a wider range of linking words and ensure each paragraph has a clear topic sentence and logical progression.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary related to trends (e.g., 'increase', 'drop', 'jump'), but there are several inaccuracies and repetitions. For instance, 'tours' instead of 'visits', 'weekend' instead of 'holiday', and 'billion' instead of 'million' are used incorrectly. The phrase 'proportion of people visit' is awkward and could be replaced with 'number of visitors'. To improve, use a wider range of precise vocabulary and ensure correct word choice. Avoid repeating the same structures and aim for more natural collocations.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors and punctuation issues that hinder clarity. Examples include subject-verb agreement ('trips ... is'), incorrect verb forms ('there is a biggest jump'), and missing articles ('from January to March session'). There are also run-on sentences and unclear pronoun references. To improve, focus on sentence structure, use a variety of complex and compound sentences correctly, and proofread for common errors. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement, tense consistency, and the use of articles and prepositions.

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