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Band 5+: The line chart below displays the crime rates in four different countries (USA, UK, Australia, and South Africa) from 1985 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a line graph from 2003 to 2018 with rates for serious assault, sexual violence, robbery, and cities homicide. Serious assault starts at about 250 in 2003 and declines to around 75 in 2018. Sexual violence remains nearly constant, approximately between 45-50. Robbery starts at about 120 in 2003, decreases to about 85 in 2011, then oscillates around 80-100 until 2018. Cities homicide remains nearly constant, hovering between 7-10 throughout the entire period.

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The line chart provides information about the crime rates based on four various countries between 1985 and 2020.

Overall, cities homicide has the least proportion whereas robbery has the highest rate throughout the given period.

Initially, the rate for victims who are affected by cities homicide started at 0% in 2003, after slight fluctations reached 0% again in 2016 and eliminated completely until 2020. In 2003, victims of sexual violence were around 45%, the figure followed with upward and downward and reached 50% in 2017.

No robbery cases were recorded until 2010, which is started at 100%, then it rose again by reaching over 100%, after a slight drop of around 5% in 2013. Moreover, serious assault had the highest proportion approximately at 230% in 2003. It increased by around 10% in a year, and then exhibited a markedly lower engagement and reaching below 100% in 2018.

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The report attempts to summarise the information provided in the chart, but there are significant discrepancies between the data presented in the description and the data reported. For example, the description mentions crime rates for specific types of crime (serious assault, sexual violence, robbery, and cities homicide) in specific years, while the report discusses crime rates in different countries over a different time period. The overall trend and specific data points mentioned in the report do not align with the provided description, indicating a misunderstanding of the task or the data. To improve, ensure that the summary accurately reflects the key features and trends of the visual information provided. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction and body paragraphs. However, the progression of ideas is sometimes unclear due to the mismatch between the reported data and the provided description. While linking words are used, their effectiveness is limited by the lack of logical flow between the points made. Paragraphing is present but could be more effectively managed to group related ideas. To improve, focus on creating a more logical flow of information and ensuring that each paragraph contributes clearly to the overall summary.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a range of vocabulary, including terms like 'fluctuations', 'eliminated completely', 'upward and downward', and 'markedly lower engagement'. However, there are instances where the vocabulary is not used precisely or appropriately in the context of the data, such as 'least proportion' and 'highest rate' when referring to specific crime types without clear comparative context. Some phrasing is also unnatural. To improve, focus on using vocabulary that is more precise and contextually appropriate for describing data trends and comparisons.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates an attempt to use a variety of sentence structures, including complex sentences. However, there are noticeable grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. For instance, 'four various countries' and 'cities homicide has the least proportion' are grammatically awkward. The use of percentages and specific figures is also inconsistent and sometimes inaccurate based on the provided description. To improve, pay closer attention to subject-verb agreement, article usage, and the accurate reporting of numerical data and trends.

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