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Band 6+: The line chart below displays the crime rates in four different countries (USA, UK, Australia, and South Africa) from 1985 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows a line graph from 2003 to 2018 with rates for serious assault, sexual violence, robbery, and cities homicide. Serious assault starts at about 250 in 2003 and declines to around 75 in 2018. Sexual violence remains nearly constant, approximately between 45-50. Robbery starts at about 120 in 2003, decreases to about 85 in 2011, then oscillates around 80-100 until 2018. Cities homicide remains nearly constant, hovering between 7-10 throughout the entire period.

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The line graph illustrate the crime rates in four different nations between 1985 and 2020.

Overall, serious assault shared the highest rate. While, cities homicide had the smallest share amongst the other crime cases throughout the years.

In 2003, serious assault starting with approximately 240, reaching its peak in 2004 at nearly 250. However, serious assault dramatically drop to 200 in 2004, this ratio then continued to fell throughout the years, reaching its lowest point at 100 in 2018. Conversely, from 2010 to 2013 robbery remained their share at 100. In 2014, robbery grew slightly to roughly 101, during the rest of the three years, robbery sustained their number until 2017.

The remaining cases, sexual violence and cities homicide retained their figure across the period. By comparison, while sexual violance showed a gradual rise in 2013 with its growth rate at nearly 50, cities homicide’s number stay steady over the time with almost zero cases until 2016.

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Task Response

The report identifies some main features but includes inaccuracies and focuses on the wrong time period. The description contains some good observations, but the overall accuracy and relevance could be improved. To improve, ensure the summary focuses on the correct time frame (1985-2020 as stated in the task, not 2003-2018) and accurately reflects the trends and data presented in the graph. Prioritize the most significant trends and make sure to include all four countries mentioned in the task.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report presents a general overview and attempts to highlight key trends, but the organization could be improved. The flow of information is somewhat disjointed, and the transitions between different crime types are not always smooth. Consider using more cohesive devices to link ideas and improve the overall structure. Paragraphing is adequate but could be more effectively used to group related information.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a range of vocabulary relevant to the topic, but there are instances where the word choice could be more precise. For example, using more specific terms to describe changes in crime rates (e.g., 'fluctuated,' 'plateaued') would enhance the description. There are also some instances of unnatural phrasing. Expanding the range of vocabulary and focusing on more accurate and natural expression would improve this area.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but grammatical errors are present and affect clarity. Errors in verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and article usage are noticeable. While the overall meaning is generally clear, correcting these errors would significantly improve the report's grammatical accuracy. Pay close attention to proofreading and editing to minimize these issues.

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