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Band 5+: The line graph and table below show the number of tourists and tourism income in four Asian countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The image contains a table showing the 'Number of international tourists, 2000-2014 (in millions)' and a line graph showing 'Tourism income, 2000-2014' in billion dollars for four Asian countries. For the years 2000, 2005, 2010, and 2014 respectively, the number of tourists were: Thailand (9.5, 11.6, 15.9, 24.8), South Korea (5.3, 6.0, 8.8, 14.2), Singapore (7.7, 9.0, 11.6, 15.1), and Japan (4.8, 6.7, 8.6, 13.4). For the same years, the tourism income in billion dollars was approximately: Thailand (9.8, 11.5, 15.8, 25), South Korea (6, 6.5, 8.5, 13), Singapore (8, 9, 11.5, 15), and Japan (5, 6, 9, 13.5).

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The given line graph represents the number of international tourists and the table illustrate tourism income from 2000 to 2014,in four Asian countries Thailand, South Korea, Singapore, and Japan.

Overall, it is clearly seen that the number of tourists and tourism income all four nations experienced growth especially Thailand, which led in both categories,while Japan and South Korea recorded the lowest figures.

Regarding on table, Thailand was the most popular destination for tourists for all period from 9,5 in millions in 2000 to 24.8 million in 2014. The second spot showed Singapore, which started with 7,7 and ended 15.1 million.Meanwhile, South Korea and Japan recorded the lowest score in table with 5.3 and 4,8 million respectively to 14,2 and 13,2 in 2014.

Focusing on line graph, Thailand again led the category with at the start with almost 10 billion dollars and this number dramatically improved to 25 billion dollars in 2014. Then,Singapore with second highest earning from tourism with nearly 7 billion to 15 billion dollars. After that South Korea with at the beginning was about 5,1 billion but between 2000 and 2005 Japan overtake South Korea at the end South Korea reached approximately 13 billion.Finally, Japan which started with lowest number with around 5 billion and this number climbed to about 14 billion.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

billion: 7

south: 6

korea: 6

number: 5

thailand: 4

japan: 4

tourists: 3

table: 3

tourism: 3

which: 3

lowest: 3

dollars: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the requirements of the task by identifying the main trends and providing data for all four countries. The overview is clear and effectively summarizes the general upward trend and the dominance of Thailand. To improve, ensure more precise comparisons between the two data sets (e.g., noting how closely the number of tourists correlates with the income generated). Additionally, be careful with grammatical structures and punctuation, particularly when introducing data or using decimal points (using commas instead of periods is common in some regions, but in English academic writing, periods are standard for decimals).

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, the progression is sometimes hindered by awkward phrasing and punctuation errors. To improve, ensure that transitions between sentences are smoother. Avoid starting sentences with 'Regarding on table' or 'Focusing on line graph'; instead, use more natural academic phrases like 'In terms of the number of tourists...' or 'As can be seen from the table...'. Additionally, ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic and that ideas flow logically without abrupt jumps.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is sufficient to convey the basic meaning, but it lacks the sophistication and precision required for higher bands. There is some repetition of words like 'number' and 'lowest'. Try to use a wider range of synonyms for 'increase' (e.g., surged, rose steadily, climbed) and 'show' (e.g., depicts, illustrates, presents). Be careful with word choices such as 'recorded the lowest score' - in this context, 'figures' or 'numbers' is more appropriate than 'score'. Also, ensure consistent use of decimal points (using a period '.' instead of a comma ',') to follow standard English conventions.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical inaccuracies that impact the clarity of the report. Issues include subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'the table illustrate' should be 'the table illustrates'), missing articles, and run-on sentences. For example, the sentence describing South Korea and Japan is quite convoluted and difficult to follow. Work on sentence structure by using subordinating conjunctions to combine ideas and ensure that every sentence has a clear subject and predicate. Pay close attention to punctuation, especially the use of commas to separate clauses and prevent run-on sentences.

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