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Band 6+: The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2013

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The image shows a line graph indicating the number of visitors per month in summer, 2013 for three different museums (British Museum, Science Museum, Natural History Museum) measured in thousands. The British Museum had the highest number of visitors, peaking at over 700,000 in August and lowest at around 500,000 in June. The Science Museum saw a steady increase from just over 200,000 in June to around 600,000 in September. The Natural History Museum had a relatively constant number of visitors, maintaining around 500,000 throughout the summer months.

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The line graph provides the data on the number of visitors to the British Museum, the Science Museum and the Natural History Museum from June to September 2013.

Overall, the British Museum was the most visited in all four months. What is more, August was the month with the least number of visitors.

The number of attendants of the British Museum started at the point of 600 thousands in June. Then it slightly increased reaching its peak in July with approximately 750 thousands visitors. Consequently, it dropped to 500 thousands in August.

The Science Museum and the Natural History Museum started at the point of 650 and 400 thousands, respectively. After a little down in July, the number of visitors to both museums was barely the same with 480 thousands. However, attendance of The Science Museum started to rise reaching almost 500 thousands in September, meanwhile the number of visitors to the Natural History Museum continued to fall to the lowest point of 300 thousand in August.

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Task Response

6.5

The response addresses the task by providing an overview of the data and describing the trends for each museum. However, there are some inaccuracies in the specific numbers mentioned, and the report could benefit from a more detailed analysis of the data presented in the graph.

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The report is generally coherent and easy to follow. However, there are some issues with cohesion, as the transitions between the different museums and months could be smoother. Additionally, the paragraphing could be more effectively managed to enhance the overall structure of the report.

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The report demonstrates a fairly wide range of vocabulary, but there are some inaccuracies and repetitions. There is an attempt at using a variety of vocabulary, but it lacks precision and sophistication in places.

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5.5

The report exhibits a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but there are some errors in sentence construction, verb tense consistency, and word choice. Punctuation and grammar are generally used correctly, but there is room for improvement in the accuracy and appropriateness of language usage.

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