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Band 7+: The line graph below shows how much money was spent on cars in four different countries in Asia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The image displays car expenditure data (in millions of USD) from 1995 to 2005 across four Asian countries: China shows values of 70, 73, 74, 82, and 95; Vietnam's figures are 40, 48, 52, 57, and 61; Thailand records 20, 21, 32, 45, and 55; Indonesia presents 60, 60, 64, 69, and 70 for the respective years of 1995, 1997, 1999, 2003, and 2005.

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The line chart depicts the amount of money spent on cars in China, Vietnam, Thailand and Indonesia between 1995 and 2005.

Overall, China spent the highest amount of money on cars throughout the period. Despite some fluctuations, the expenditure on cars in all four nations increased over the period, and among this, the most significant increase showed in Indonesia’s spending.

Firstly, China’s spending on cars went up from nearly 80 million US dollars in 1995 to 90 million US dollars in 1999, and after a slight decline in next four years, it rose to just under 100 million US dollars in2005. In 1995. almost 55 million US dollars’ worth of cars sold in Vietnam. and this staidly increased to just over 70 million US dollars in 2005.

The expenditure on cars in Thailand fluctuated between around 50 million US dollars in1995 and about 60 million US dollars in 2005. Indonesia’s spending on cars had gradually increased from approximately 30 million US dollars in 1995 to 40 million US dollars in 1999 before it dramatically climbed to just above 70 million US dollars in 2005

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the general trends and making some comparisons. However, there are significant inaccuracies in the data (e.g., China's spending is stated as nearly 80 million in 1995, but the actual figure is 70 million; Vietnam's figures are misreported; Thailand's values are incorrect; Indonesia's figures are also inaccurate). These inaccuracies in key areas detract from the task achievement. The report also omits specific data points and fails to provide a clear comparison between countries. To improve, ensure that all figures are accurately reported and that the main features are clearly highlighted with relevant comparisons.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. The progression of ideas is logical, and the use of cohesive devices is mostly effective. However, there are minor lapses in cohesion, such as the abrupt transition between countries and the lack of clear paragraphing for each country. To improve, consider using clearer topic sentences and ensuring each paragraph focuses on a single country or a clear comparison.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate and varied, with some good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'depicts', 'expenditure', 'fluctuated'). However, there are some inaccuracies and awkward phrasings, such as 'the most significant increase showed in Indonesia's spending' and 'staidly increased'. To improve, use more precise and natural collocations, and ensure that verbs and nouns are used correctly (e.g., 'showed' should be 'was seen' or 'occurred').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures, including complex sentences and appropriate use of tenses. However, there are several minor errors and punctuation issues, such as missing spaces after periods (e.g., 'in2005', 'in1995') and incorrect verb forms (e.g., 'staidly increased' should be 'steadily increased'). To improve, proofread carefully for punctuation and ensure subject-verb agreement and correct word forms throughout.

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