Line Graph

Band 4+: The line graph below shows how much money was spent on cars in four different countries in Asia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

See all user-written answers on this topic

Image for topic: The line graph below shows how much money was spent on cars in four different countries in Asia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

Our system will evaluate the answer based on this AI-generated description.

The image displays car expenditure data (in millions of USD) from 1995 to 2005 across four Asian countries: China shows values of 70, 73, 74, 82, and 95; Vietnam's figures are 40, 48, 52, 57, and 61; Thailand records 20, 21, 32, 45, and 55; Indonesia presents 60, 60, 64, 69, and 70 for the respective years of 1995, 1997, 1999, 2003, and 2005.

Given the complexity of the image, the above description may not be entirely accurate.

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Check it out

Note: Both the topic and the answer were created by one of our users.

The given line graph presented the changes of spending money on cars in china, Vietnam , Thailand and Indonesia in Asia from 1995 to 2005 .

A glance at the graph reveals that china was more highest spending money on automobile than Indonesia was the lowest one .

As it is presented in the graph spending rate money from 1995 to 1999 in chain was a ceilling trend 80 up to 90 US dollars , Vietnam was slowly change from 50.5 to 60 US dollars then Thailand plateau in 50 US dollars and about Indonesia was steadily change from 30 to 40 US dollars .

According to the years from 1999 to 2005 china was jump from 90 to 90.5 US dollars while Vietnam rose starting with 60 US dollars to 70.5 US dollars meanwhile Thailand surged 50 until 60 US dollars ,then Indonesia go up from40 to 70 US dollars .

Word Count: 152

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
Opt for even more advanced words when appropriate.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

dollars: 9

indonesia: 4

graph: 3

spending: 3

money: 3

china: 3

vietnam: 3

thailand: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by describing the general trends in car expenditure across the four countries. However, there are several inaccuracies in the data (e.g., China's spending is described as '80 up to 90 US dollars' and 'jump from 90 to 90.5', which do not match the given figures). The report also misidentifies Indonesia as the lowest spender, while the data shows Thailand had the lowest values. The structure is somewhat disorganized, and comparisons between countries are limited. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the main trends and key figures, and make clearer comparisons between the countries. Use more precise language and avoid vague or incorrect descriptions.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report attempts to present the data but lacks a clear overall structure. The information is not logically organized, and the use of cohesive devices is limited and often inaccurate, making the message difficult to follow. Paragraphing is not effectively managed. To improve, create a clear overview paragraph that highlights the main trends, and then organize the body paragraphs by time period or country, using appropriate linking words to show comparisons and changes.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive, with several inaccuracies (e.g., 'ceilling trend', 'plateau in 50 US dollars'). There is limited range and flexibility, and the phrasing is often unnatural. To improve, learn and use a wider range of precise vocabulary for describing trends (e.g., 'rose steadily', 'experienced a sharp increase', 'remained stable') and avoid informal or incorrect expressions.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and problems with articles and prepositions. Sentence structures are often incomplete or unclear. Punctuation is also faulty. To improve, focus on mastering basic sentence structures and verb tenses, especially the past simple for describing historical data. Practice writing clear, grammatically correct sentences and proofread carefully.

Answers On The Same Topic:

The line graph below shows how much money was spent on cars in four different countries in Asia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The line graph depicts the quantity of money spent on cars between 1995 and 2005. The information is given for four countries: China, Vietnam, Thailand, and Indonesia. Firstly, China’s spending on cars went up from nearly 80 million US dollars in 1995 to 90 million US dollars in 1999, and after a slight decline in […]

Band 7+

The line graph below shows how much money was spent on cars in four different countries in Asia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The line chart depicts the amount of money spent on cars in China, Vietnam, Thailand and Indonesia between 1995 and 2005. Overall, China spent the highest amount of money on cars throughout the period. Despite some fluctuations, the expenditure on cars in all four nations increased over the period, and among this, the most significant […]

Band 7+

The line graph below shows how much money was spent on cars in four different countries in Asia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The line graph provides information about the amount of money spent on cars in China, Vietnam, Thailand and Indonesia between 1995 and 2005. Overall, all countries experienced a growth in expenses on cars with China having the highest numbers throughout the given timeframe. In 1995, the figures for China were the largest at 80 USD […]

Band 7+

The line graph below shows how much money was spent on cars in four different countries in Asia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The line graph illustrates the expenditure on cars in four Asian countries – China, Vietnam, Thailand, and Indonesia – from 1995 to 2005. The units are measured in millions of US dollars. Overall, all four countries experienced an upward trend in car spending over the period. China consistently held the highest expenditure throughout, while Indonesia […]

Band 7+

See All

The chart below shows the percentage of households with different kinds of technology in the UK from 1997 to 2001. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph compares the percentage of UK households that had access to various types of technology, namely CD player, telephone, computer, and internet as well as DVD player over the period from 1997 to 2001. Overall, it can be seen that all types of compared technology experienced an overall increase. CD player dominated over the […]

Band 7+

The graph shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in 2018 in one country between 2011 and 2018.

The line graph illustrates the number of shop closures and new shop openings in a particular country over the period from 2011 to 2018. Overall, it can be clearly seen that both shop openings and closures showed an erratic pattern over the period, whereas shop closure experienced a dramatic drop in the middle before recovering.In […]

Band 7+

The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The line graph shows the birth rates of China and the US over the period from 1920 to 2000 changed. Overall, the birth rates in both countries declined over the 80-year period. The two trends are quite similar in terms of their overall decline. In most years, although there was an overall decline in both […]

Band 6+

The graph below shows the number of international tourists visiting three different countries between 2000 and 2010.

The line chart illustrates the number of international tourist arrivals in three countries between 2000 and 2010. Overall, all three countries followed a similar rising trend, especially France, which experienced a surge to become the country holding the leading position in the volume of incoming travelers. Regarding the USA, this country maintained an upward trajectory. […]

Band 7+

The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

Band 6+

See All

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium