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Band 6+: The line graph below shows information on rice export from Thailand to other countries from 1995 to 2020. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant, Write at least 150 words

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The image displays a line graph titled 'The percentage of rice export from Thailand, 1995 - 2020', with a y-axis from 0% to 35% and an x-axis showing the years 1995, 2000, 2005, 2010, 2015, and 2020. The data points for the four countries shown are: China (1995: 5%, 2000: 10%, 2005: 12%, 2010: 16%, 2015: 24%, 2020: 29%); Japan (1995: 25%, 2000: 22%, 2005: 19%, 2010: 18%, 2015: 17%, 2020: 17%); Korea (1995: 10%, 2000: 8%, 2005: 15%, 2010: 5%, 2015: 5%, 2020: 3%); and India (1995: 7%, 2000: 7%, 2005: 7%, 2010: 15%, 2015: 13%, 2020: 13%).

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The graph illustrates data on the percentage of rice trade from Thailand to other nations between 1995 and 2020.

In the beginning, trade with Japan was highest, but it faced steady decrease. Although, rice export to China was lowest in 1995, it experienced rapid increase. In addition, the percentage of rice export to Korea and India showed fluctuations.

While, at the start of the period rice trade with Japan was 25%, it declined steadily over the period. In constrast, the percentage of rice export was around 5% in 1995, but it increased rapidly over the time to around 30%.

On the other hand, the percentage of rice export from Thailand to Korea was 10% in 1995, it faced decrease to approximately 6% in export till 2000, before increasing to 15% in 2005. In addition, it decreased again to 5% in 2010 and remained constant till 2015, but declined steadily rest of the period. Opposite to that, the proportion of trade to India, remained constant from 1995 to 2005. Addition to this , it increased from around 7% to 15% in 2005, and then faced slight decrease to approximately 13% in 2015 and remained same till 2020.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

export: 5

percentage: 4

trade: 4

faced: 3

decrease: 3

addition: 3

period: 3

around: 3

remained: 3

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Task Response

The report adequately covers the main features of the graph, including the overall trends for each country. It correctly identifies the initial highest and lowest values, the general decline for Japan, the increase for China, and the fluctuations for Korea and India. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions: the report does not mention the exact final value for China (29%) and incorrectly states it reached around 30%; it also omits the specific value for Korea in 2020 (3%). Additionally, there are minor grammatical and lexical issues (e.g., 'In constrast', 'it faced decrease', 'Addition to this') that slightly affect clarity. To improve, ensure all key data points are accurately reported and proofread for language errors.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure, with an introduction and separate paragraphs for different countries. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by unclear referencing (e.g., 'it' in the second paragraph) and abrupt transitions. The use of cohesive devices is somewhat mechanical, and some sentences are not well-connected. To improve, ensure each paragraph has a clear topic sentence and that pronouns clearly refer to the intended noun. Also, use a wider range of linking words and phrases to show contrast and comparison more naturally.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, with some good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'rice trade' for 'rice export'). However, there is repetition of words like 'decrease' and 'increase', and some phrases are awkward or inaccurate (e.g., 'faced steady decrease', 'in constrast', 'rest of the period'). To improve, use a wider range of synonyms and more precise language (e.g., 'experienced a gradual decline', 'witnessed a sharp rise'). Also, pay attention to collocations and word forms to sound more natural. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a mix of simple and complex sentences, but there are several grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. For example, 'Although, rice export to China was lowest in 1995, it experienced rapid increase' has an incorrect comma after 'Although', and 'in constrast' is misspelled. There are also issues with articles and prepositions (e.g., 'the percentage of rice export was around 5%' should be 'the percentage of rice exports was around 5%'). To improve, proofread carefully and focus on sentence structure, especially the use of commas and conjunctions. Also, ensure subject-verb agreement and correct use of tenses.

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